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     <section
      id='abstract'>
       <p>
-        The Contacts API defines the high-level interfaces required to provide read access to a user&#39;s unified address book.
+        The Contacts API defines the high-level interfaces required to obtain read access to a user&#39;s unified address book.
       </p>
       <p>
         This API includes the following key interfaces:
       </p>
       <ul>
-         <li>A <a href="#servicecontacts-interface"<code>ServiceContacts</code></a> interface, which provides a Contacts extension to the <code>navigator.service</code> object.</li>
-         <li>A <a href="#contacts-interface"<code>Contacts</code></a> interface, which provides the read operation for access to a user's unified address book.</li>
-         <li>A <a href="#contact-interface"<code>Contact</code></a> interface, which provides individual contact records that are returned following a successful read operation.</li>
+         <li>A <a href="#contacts-interface"<code>Contacts</code></a> interface, which provides the method needed to access to a user's unified address book.</li>
+         <li>A <a href="#contact-interface"<code>Contact</code></a> interface, which provides the individual contact information that can be returned following a successful read operation.</li>
       </ul>
       <p>
         A set of <a href="#security-and-privacy-considerations">Security and Privacy Considerations</a> are presented for the discretion of both 

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