- From: Robin Berjon via cvs-syncmail <cvsmail@w3.org>
- Date: Wed, 31 Aug 2011 10:37:54 +0000
- To: public-dap-commits@w3.org
Update of /sources/public/2009/dap/system-info
In directory hutz:/tmp/cvs-serv5260
Modified Files:
battery-status.html
Log Message:
editorial fixes
Index: battery-status.html
===================================================================
RCS file: /sources/public/2009/dap/system-info/battery-status.html,v
retrieving revision 1.37
retrieving revision 1.38
diff -u -d -r1.37 -r1.38
--- battery-status.html 24 Aug 2011 10:38:58 -0000 1.37
+++ battery-status.html 31 Aug 2011 10:37:52 -0000 1.38
@@ -81,9 +81,9 @@
the web application with an assumption of sufficient battery level
for the task at hand. This means the battery of a device may exhaust
faster than desired because web developers are unable to make
- decisions based on the battery status. With this knowledge of the
+ decisions based on the battery status. Given knowledge of the
battery status, web developers are able to craft web content and
- applications which are power efficient leading to improved user
+ applications which are power-efficient, thereby leading to improved user
experience.
</p>
<p>
@@ -222,13 +222,13 @@
Represents how much of the internal power source remains,
scaled from 0 to 100. A value of 0 indicates that the
system's battery is depleted, i.e. it is about to be
- suspended. If the implementation is unable to report
+ suspended. If the implementation is unable to report the
battery's level, then <code>level</code> MUST be
set to <code>null</code>.
</dd>
- <dt>readonly attribute string? status</dt>
+ <dt>readonly attribute DOMString? status</dt>
<dd>
- One of <code>critical</code>, <code>low</code>, <code>ok</code>
+ One of <code>"critical"</code>, <code>"low"</code>, <code>"ok"</code>
or <code>null</code>.
Represents how much of the internal power source remains,
scaled from <code>critical</code> to <code>ok</code>. The
@@ -236,7 +236,7 @@
<code>ok</code> mirror the definitions of
<a>batterycritical</a>, <a>batterylow</a> and <a>batteryok</a>
events respectively. If the implementation is unable to
- report battery's level, then status MUST be set to
+ report the battery's level, then status MUST be set to
<code>null</code>.
</dd>
<dt>void initBatteryStatusEvent ()</dt>
@@ -245,12 +245,26 @@
through the <code>DocumentEvent</code> interface
[[!DOM-LEVEL-3-EVENTS]].
<dl class='parameters'>
- <dt>DOMString type</dt><dd></dd>
- <dt>boolean bubbles</dt><dd></dd>
- <dt>boolean cancelable</dt><dd></dd>
- <dt>boolean isPlugged</dt><dd></dd>
- <dt>float? level</dt><dd></dd>
- <dt>float? status</dt><dd></dd>
+ <dt>DOMString type</dt>
+ <dd>
+ The type of the event, which is one of <a>batterystatus</a>, <a>batterylow</a>,
+ <a>batterycritical</a> or <a>batteryok</a>.
+ </dd>
+ <dt>boolean bubbles</dt>
+ <dd>Whether the event will bubble, as defined in [[!DOM-LEVEL-3-EVENTS]].</dd>
+ <dt>boolean cancelable</dt>
+ <dd>Whether the event will be cancelable, as defined in [[!DOM-LEVEL-3-EVENTS]].</dd>
+ <dt>boolean isPlugged</dt>
+ <dd>Whether the device is plugged in or not.</dd>
+ <dt>float? level</dt>
+ <dd>
+ The level of the battery, between 0 and 100. Values inferior to 0 MUST cause <code>level</code> to be set to 0;
+ values superior to 100 MUST cause <code>level</code> to be set to 100.
+ </dd>
+ <dt>DOMString? status</dt>
+ <dd>
+ One of <code>"critical"</code>, <code>"low"</code>, <code>"ok"</code> or <code>null</code>.
+ </dd>
</dl>
</dd>
</dl>
@@ -359,7 +373,7 @@
the low battery condition is reached, and
</li>
<li>
- the battery is depleting
+ the battery is depleting.
</li>
</ul>
<p>
@@ -424,7 +438,7 @@
the critically low battery condition is reached, and
</li>
<li>
- the battery is depleting
+ the battery is depleting.
</li>
</ul>
<p>
@@ -491,7 +505,7 @@
the battery is plugged in, and
</li>
<li>
- the battery is being charged or is at its full capacity
+ the battery is being charged or is at its full capacity.
</li>
</ul>
<p>
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