2009/dap/policy-reqs Overview.html,1.11,1.12

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RCS file: /sources/public/2009/dap/policy-reqs/Overview.html,v
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retrieving revision 1.12
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--- Overview.html	1 Mar 2010 13:54:27 -0000	1.11
+++ Overview.html	1 Mar 2010 13:57:36 -0000	1.12
@@ -383,10 +383,10 @@
 	<ul><li>getting the user to understand and set rules on sharing their
 information is hard;</li>
 <li>if users set their preferences in the user agent, they will expect the
-user agent the enforce these preferences while it cannot actually control
-the data once they've been transmitted;</li>
-<li>developers are very likely to ignore policy data sent along with the
-data they're actually interested in, and not be in a position to act
+user agent to enforce these preferences while it cannot actually control
+the data flow once the data has been transmitted;</li>
+<li>developers are very likely to ignore policy rules sent along with the
+data they're actually interested in, and may not be in a position to act
 upon these policies even if they wanted to</li>
 	</ul>
 	</div>

Received on Monday, 1 March 2010 13:57:39 UTC