2009/dap/system-info Overview.html,1.59,1.60

Update of /sources/public/2009/dap/system-info
In directory hutz:/tmp/cvs-serv14119

Modified Files:
	Overview.html 
Log Message:
editorial fixes following feedback at http://www.w3.org/mid/6DFA1B20D858A14488A66D6EEDF26AA3232A1FB21A@seldmbx03.corpusers.net


Index: Overview.html
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RCS file: /sources/public/2009/dap/system-info/Overview.html,v
retrieving revision 1.59
retrieving revision 1.60
diff -u -d -r1.59 -r1.60
--- Overview.html	22 Jan 2010 08:32:30 -0000	1.59
+++ Overview.html	27 Jan 2010 10:43:57 -0000	1.60
@@ -676,7 +676,7 @@
             <dd>This property represents the maximum upload bandwidth offered by this network connection, measured in Kbits/s.</dd>
 
             <dt>readonly attribute float? currentSignalStrength</dt>
-            <dd>This connection's signal strength. This value MUST be <code>null</code> if this connection is wired.</dd>
+            <dd>This connection's signal strength, as a normalised value between 0 (no signal detected) and 1 (the level is at its maximum value). . This value MUST be <code>null</code> if this connection is wired.</dd>
 
             <dt>readonly attribute DOMString macAddress</dt>
             <dd>The <abbr title="Media Access Control">MAC</abbr>
@@ -969,7 +969,7 @@
               <dd><code>true</code> when this device suports software modification, <code>else</code> otherwise.</dd>
               <dt>readonly attribute unsigned long capacity</dt>
               <dd>The amount of data that this device can hold, in bytes. A <a>watch</a> operation operating on an object of type <a>StorageUnit</a> must invoke the success callback only when this attribute has changed</dd>
-              <dt>readonly attribute int availableCapacity</dt>
+              <dt>readonly attribute unsigned long availableCapacity</dt>
               <dd>The amount of available data that this device can hold, in bytes</dd>
               <dt>readonly attribute boolean isRemoveable</dt>
               <dd><code>true</code> if this unit can be removed from the system (e.g. a memory card unplugged, or a disk ejected), <code>false</code> otherwise</dd>
@@ -1124,7 +1124,7 @@
               <dd>The list of cameras attached</dd>
               
               <dt>readonly attribute Microphone microphones[]</dt>
-              <dd>The list of cameras attached</dd>
+              <dd>The list of microphones attached</dd>
             </dl>
           </section>
           
@@ -1181,7 +1181,7 @@
               <dd>The number of image sensor elements (pixels) of this camera</dd>
 
               <dt>readonly attribute float? maxZoomFactor</dt>
-              <dd>The maximum zoom factor of this camera, MUST be <code>null</code> is <a>hasPhysicalZoom</a> is <code>false</code>
+              <dd>The maximum zoom factor of this camera. This value MUST be <code>null</code> if the camera doesn not have a zoom (whether physical or digital)</dd>
               <p class="issue">Use focal length instead? And shutter speed/aperture/ISO/sensor type?</p></dd>
             </dl>
           </section>

Received on Wednesday, 27 January 2010 10:44:01 UTC