2009/dap/policy-reqs Overview.html,1.5,1.6

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	Overview.html 
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feature as IRI is a requirement, not a definition
other editorial caviar in definitions


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RCS file: /sources/public/2009/dap/policy-reqs/Overview.html,v
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--- Overview.html	10 Feb 2010 21:16:56 -0000	1.5
+++ Overview.html	22 Feb 2010 16:15:48 -0000	1.6
@@ -54,8 +54,8 @@
           Capabilities.
         </dd>
         <dt>Device Capability</dt>
-        <dd>A Device Capability is a device resource or device functionality
-          requiring access 
+        <dd>A Device Capability is a device resource or device functionality, which may
+          require access 
           control.</dd>
         <dd> Examples of device capabilities are the ability to
           read a local 
@@ -68,20 +68,19 @@
           them.  
         </dd>
         <dd>
-          Although there will be simple Device APIs that provide access only to
-          a single Device Capability, it must be expected that there are also
+          Although there are simple Device APIs that provide access only to
+          a single Device Capability,  there are also
           more complex APIs that expose multiple Device Capabilities; examples
           might include a camera API that provides the ability to geotag a photo
           with the current location, or a messaging API that provides the
           ability to access documents stored locally and attach them to outgoing
           messages. Therefore, enabling or disabling access to a specific Device
-          Capability will not directly correspond to enabling or disabling
+          Capability may not directly correspond to enabling or disabling
           access to a single Device API interface.
         </dd>
         <dt>Feature</dt>
         <dd>A Feature is a set of Device APIs that provides access
-          to specified Device Capabilities. A Feature is identified
-          uniquely by IRI, and is the unit of expression of dependencies by Web
+          to specified Device Capabilities. A Feature is the unit of expression of dependencies by Web
           Applications.</dd>
         <dt>Implicit Consent</dt>
         <dd>A user action that is semantically meaningful in the

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