2009/dap/contacts Overview.html,1.51,1.52

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@@ -141,13 +141,13 @@
 				<h2>Privacy by Design</h2>
 				
 				<p>
-					The Contacts API has been designed with	the intention of putting the user in control of their data and allowing user's 
+					The Contacts API has been designed with	the intention of putting the user in control of their data and allowing users 
 					to control the flow of their information to 3rd party sites and services.
 				</p>
 				
 				<p>
 					The <a href="#security-and-privacy-considerations">Security and Privacy Considerations</a> section provides both normative 
-					and non-normative recommendations for both implementors and consumers of the Contacts API - it recommends that user's 
+					and non-normative recommendations for both implementors and consumers of the Contacts API - it recommends that users 
 					should be able to review the information that is being requested by a web application and allow a user to override, modify 
 					or supplement the requested information as they may require.
 				</p>
@@ -169,7 +169,7 @@
 					</p>
 					
 					<p>
-						For example, a web application that requires email addresses to send information via email on to a selection of a user's contacts
+						For example, a web application that requires email addresses to send information via email on to a selection of a user's Contacts
 						should only need to request the <a href="#widl-ContactProperties-emails"><code>emails</code></a> attribute in the 
 						<a href="#widl-Contacts-find"><code>fields</code></a> parameter of the associated <a href="#contacts-interface"><code>Contacts</code></a> 
 						<a href='#widl-Contacts-find'>find()</a> operation. The web application may request additional fields as required.
@@ -270,7 +270,7 @@
 			
 			<p>
 				The API defined in this specification can be used to create, retrieve, update and remove contact information from a 
-				user's address books. All API methods disclose information related to a user's contacts such as their phone number(s), 
+				user's address book(s). All API methods disclose information related to a user's contacts such as their phone number(s), 
 				email address(es) and other personally identifying information. The distribution of this information could potentially 
 				compromise the user's privacy. A conforming implementation of this specification MUST provide a mechanism that protects 
 				the user's privacy and this mechanism should ensure that no contact information is creatable, retrivable, updateable or 

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