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	Overview.html Overview.src.html 
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Fix some grammatical errors.

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RCS file: /sources/public/csswg/css3-writing-modes/Overview.html,v
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diff -u -d -r1.143 -r1.144
--- Overview.html	25 May 2011 03:00:13 -0000	1.143
+++ Overview.html	25 May 2011 03:20:11 -0000	1.144
@@ -281,8 +281,8 @@
    <li class=no-num><a href="#script-orientations">Appendix B:
     Bi-orientational Transformations</a>
 
-   <li class=no-num><a href="#vertical-typesetting-details">Appendix C:
-    Character-level Rules for Vertical Typesetting</a>
+   <li class=no-num><a href="#vertical-typeset-synth">Appendix C: Vertical
+    Typesetting Synthesis</a>
 
    <li class=no-num><a href="#intrinsic-sizing">Appendix D: Intrinsic
     Dimensions</a>
@@ -1695,8 +1695,8 @@
    <li>
     <p>If the UA needs to synthesize such features (e.g. if an OpenType font
      has only the <code>vert</code> but not the <code>vrt2</code> feature),
-     then the settings in <a href="#vertical-typesetting-details">Appendix
-     C</a> are recommended.
+     then the settings in <a href="#vertical-typeset-synth">Appendix C</a>
+     are recommended.
   </ul>
 
   <h2 id=abstract-box><span class=secno>6. </span> Abstract Box Terminology</h2>
@@ -2855,7 +2855,8 @@
 
   <h2 class=no-num id=acknowledgements> Acknowledgements</h2>
 
-  <p>John Daggett, Martin Heijdra, Paul Nelson, Michel Suignard, Steve Zilles
+  <p>John Daggett, Martin Heijdra, Ken Lunde, Paul Nelson, Michel Suignard,
+   Steve Zilles
 
   <h2 class=no-num id=bidi-html> Appendix A: Bidi Rules for HTML</h2>
 
@@ -2986,11 +2987,13 @@
    href="#text-orientation0"><code
    class=property>text-orientation</code></a>&rsquo;.
 
-  <h2 class=no-num id=vertical-typesetting-details>Appendix C:
-   Character-level Rules for Vertical Typesetting</h2>
+  <h2 class=no-num id=vertical-typeset-synth>Appendix C: Vertical Typesetting
+   Synthesis</h2>
 
   <p><em>This appendix is non-normative.</em>
 
+  <p class=issue>This section needs careful review.
+
   <p>When &lsquo;<a href="#text-orientation0"><code
    class=property>text-orientation</code></a>&rsquo; is either &lsquo;<a
    href="#vertical-right"><code class=css>vertical-right</code></a>&rsquo; or
@@ -3010,7 +3013,7 @@
     class=property>text-orientation</code>&rsquo;</a>.
 
    <li>Set spaces (Zs), dashes (Pd), connectors (Pc), and bracketing
-    punctuation (Ps, Pe, Pi, Pf) either upright with vertical font settings
+    punctuation (Ps, Pe, Pi, Pf) either upright using vertical font settings
     if available or sideways if they are not.
     <p class=note>Thus a THREE-PER-EM SPACE (U+2004) can be expected to
      provide a 1/3-em advance in the inline dimension, and brackets can be
@@ -3056,7 +3059,7 @@
      <li>Other Symbols (So) from the Latin-1 Supplement and Letterlike
       Symbols blocks.
 
-     <li>Modifier Symbols (Sk) except the tone marks listed below.
+     <li>Modifier Symbols (Sk), except the tone marks listed below.
     </ul>
 
    <li>Set the following characters upright (i.e. translated, using vertical
@@ -3066,11 +3069,9 @@
       those in the <abbr title="U+A700–U+A716">Modifier Tone Letters</abbr>
       block.
 
-     <li>All Other Symbols (So) characters except unless otherwise specified
-      above
+     <li>All Other Symbols (So) characters not otherwise specified above.
 
-     <li>All Other Numbers (No) characters except unless otherwise specified
-      above
+     <li>All Other Numbers (No) characters not otherwise specified above.
     </ul>
 
    <li>Set all other characters sideways (i.e. rotated, using horizontal font

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--- Overview.src.html	25 May 2011 03:00:13 -0000	1.150
+++ Overview.src.html	25 May 2011 03:20:11 -0000	1.151
@@ -1221,7 +1221,7 @@
     
     <li><p>If the UA needs to synthesize such features (e.g. if an OpenType font
       has only the <code>vert</code> but not the <code>vrt2</code> feature),
-      then the settings in <a href="#vertical-typesetting-details">Appendix C</a>
+      then the settings in <a href="#vertical-typeset-synth">Appendix C</a>
       are recommended.
   </ul>
 
@@ -2138,7 +2138,8 @@
 <h2 class="no-num" id="acknowledgements">
 Acknowledgements</h2>
 
-<p>John Daggett, Martin Heijdra, Paul Nelson, Michel Suignard, Steve Zilles</p>
+<p>John Daggett, Martin Heijdra, Ken Lunde,
+Paul Nelson, Michel Suignard, Steve Zilles</p>
 
 <h2 id="bidi-html" class=no-num>
 Appendix A: Bidi Rules for HTML</h2>
@@ -2207,11 +2208,13 @@
     Authors can work around this lack of support with the ''rotate-left''
     value of 'text-orientation'.
 
-<h2 id="vertical-typesetting-details" class="no-num">Appendix C:
-Character-level Rules for Vertical Typesetting</h2>
+<h2 id="vertical-typeset-synth" class="no-num">Appendix C:
+Vertical Typesetting Synthesis</h2>
 
   <p><em>This appendix is non-normative.</em></p>
 
+  <p class="issue">This section needs careful review.</p>
+
   <p>When 'text-orientation' is either ''vertical-right'' or ''upright'',
     the following settings are recommended:
 
@@ -2225,7 +2228,7 @@
       <a href="#vertical-typesetting">as required by 'text-orientation'</a>.
     <li>Set spaces (Zs), dashes (Pd), connectors (Pc), and
       bracketing punctuation (Ps, Pe, Pi, Pf)
-      either upright with vertical font settings if available
+      either upright using vertical font settings if available
       or sideways if they are not.
       <p class="note">Thus a THREE-PER-EM SPACE (U+2004) can be expected
       to provide a 1/3-em advance in the inline dimension, and brackets
@@ -2260,7 +2263,7 @@
         <li>Other Symbols (So) from the
           Latin-1 Supplement and
           Letterlike Symbols blocks.
-        <li>Modifier Symbols (Sk) except the tone marks listed below.
+        <li>Modifier Symbols (Sk), except the tone marks listed below.
       </ul>
     <li>Set the following characters upright (i.e. translated,
       using vertical font settings if available):
@@ -2268,10 +2271,8 @@
         <li>Modifier Symbols (Sk) in the U+02E5–U+02EB tone marks range and              
           those in the <abbr title="U+A700–U+A716">Modifier Tone Letters</abbr>
           block.
-        <li>All Other Symbols (So) characters except unless
-          otherwise specified above
-        <li>All Other Numbers (No) characters except unless
-          otherwise specified above
+        <li>All Other Symbols (So) characters not otherwise specified above.
+        <li>All Other Numbers (No) characters not otherwise specified above.
       </ul>
     <li>Set all other characters sideways (i.e. rotated,
       using horizontal font settings).

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