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From: Elika Etemad via cvs-syncmail <cvsmail@w3.org>
Date: Wed, 23 Feb 2011 05:17:15 +0000
To: public-css-commits@w3.org
Message-Id: <E1Ps76B-0003Ss-Gv@lionel-hutz.w3.org>
Update of /sources/public/csswg/css3-text
In directory hutz:/tmp/cvs-serv13302

Modified Files:
	Overview.html Overview.src.html 
Log Message:
editorial tweaks to conformance section

Index: Overview.html
===================================================================
RCS file: /sources/public/csswg/css3-text/Overview.html,v
retrieving revision 1.60
retrieving revision 1.61
diff -u -d -r1.60 -r1.61
--- Overview.html	23 Feb 2011 05:09:17 -0000	1.60
+++ Overview.html	23 Feb 2011 05:17:13 -0000	1.61
@@ -90,7 +90,7 @@
     <dt>This version:
 
     <dd><a href="http://dev.w3.org/csswg/css3-text/Overview.html">$Date:
-     2011/02/19 14:54:46 $ (CVS $Revision$)</a> <!--
+     2011/02/23 05:09:17 $ (CVS $Revision$)</a> <!--
       <dd><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2011/WD-css3-text-20110223/">http://www.w3.org/TR/2011/WD-css3-text-20110223/</a></dd>
     -->
      
@@ -543,7 +543,8 @@
 
   <p class=note>Note, this is an informative note.
 
-  <p>Conformance to CSS Text Level 3 is defined for three classes:
+  <p>Conformance to CSS Text Level 3 is defined for three conformance
+   classes:
 
   <dl>
    <dt><dfn id=style-sheet title="style sheet!!as conformance class">style
@@ -570,9 +571,9 @@
   <p>A renderer is conformant to CSS Text Level 3 if, in addition to
    interpreting the style sheet as defined by the appropriate specifications,
    it supports all the properties defined by CSS Text Level 3 by parsing them
-   correctly and rendering the document accordingly. However the inability of
-   a UA to correctly render a document due to limitations of the device does
-   not make the UA non-conformant. (For example, a UA is not required to
+   correctly and rendering the document accordingly. However, the inability
+   of a UA to correctly render a document due to limitations of the device
+   does not make the UA non-conformant. (For example, a UA is not required to
    render color on a monochrome monitor.)
 
   <p>An authoring tool is conformant to CSS Text Level 3 if it writes

Index: Overview.src.html
===================================================================
RCS file: /sources/public/csswg/css3-text/Overview.src.html,v
retrieving revision 1.154
retrieving revision 1.155
diff -u -d -r1.154 -r1.155
--- Overview.src.html	23 Feb 2011 05:09:17 -0000	1.154
+++ Overview.src.html	23 Feb 2011 05:17:13 -0000	1.155
@@ -251,7 +251,7 @@
 
   <p class="note">Note, this is an informative note.</p>
 
-  <p>Conformance to CSS Text Level 3 is defined for three classes:</p>
+  <p>Conformance to CSS Text Level 3 is defined for three conformance classes:</p>
 
   <dl>
     <dt><dfn title="style sheet!!as conformance class">style sheet</dfn>
@@ -273,7 +273,7 @@
   if, in addition to interpreting the style sheet as defined by the
   appropriate specifications, it supports all the properties defined
   by CSS Text Level 3 by parsing them correctly
-  and rendering the document accordingly. However the inability of a
+  and rendering the document accordingly. However, the inability of a
   UA to correctly render a document due to limitations of the device
   does not make the UA non-conformant. (For example, a UA is not
   required to render color on a monochrome monitor.)
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