csswg/css3-images Overview.html,1.160,1.161 Overview.src.html,1.167,1.168

Update of /sources/public/csswg/css3-images
In directory hutz:/tmp/cvs-serv31747

Modified Files:
	Overview.html Overview.src.html 
Log Message:
Editorial rewording of part of element() at Hixie's request.


Index: Overview.html
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RCS file: /sources/public/csswg/css3-images/Overview.html,v
retrieving revision 1.160
retrieving revision 1.161
diff -u -d -r1.160 -r1.161
--- Overview.html	22 Aug 2011 22:55:55 -0000	1.160
+++ Overview.html	22 Aug 2011 23:38:15 -0000	1.161
@@ -548,7 +548,7 @@
     intrinsic dimensions.
 
    <dt>The function references an element that is not rendered, but which <a
-    href="#paint-source"><i title=paint-source>represents a paint
+    href="#paint-source"><i title=paint-source>provides a paint
     source</i></a>
 
    <dd>The function represents an image with the dimensions and appearance of
@@ -597,13 +597,13 @@
    <p class=issue>TODO: Create examples of all of the above cases.</p>
   </div>
 
-  <p>Host languages may define that some elements represent a <dfn
+  <p>Host languages may define that some elements provide a <dfn
    id=paint-source title=paint-source>paint source</dfn>. Paint sources have
    an intrinsic width, height, and appearance, separate from the process of
    rendering, and so may be used as images even when they're not being
-   rendered. Examples of paint sources are the &lt;linearGradient>,
-   &lt;radialGradient>, and &lt;pattern> elements in SVG, or the &lt;img>,
-   &lt;video>, and &lt;canvas> elements in HTML.</p>
+   rendered. Examples of elements that provide paint sources are the
+   &lt;linearGradient>, &lt;radialGradient>, and &lt;pattern> elements in
+   SVG, or the &lt;img>, &lt;video>, and &lt;canvas> elements in HTML.</p>
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   <h4 class="no-num no-toc" id=element-cycles> Detecting and Resolving

Index: Overview.src.html
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RCS file: /sources/public/csswg/css3-images/Overview.src.html,v
retrieving revision 1.167
retrieving revision 1.168
diff -u -d -r1.167 -r1.168
--- Overview.src.html	22 Aug 2011 22:55:55 -0000	1.167
+++ Overview.src.html	22 Aug 2011 23:38:15 -0000	1.168
@@ -314,7 +314,7 @@
 		<dt>The function doesn't reference an element</dt>
 		<dd>The function represents a solid-color transparent-black image with no intrinsic dimensions.</dd>
 
-		<dt>The function references an element that is not rendered, but which <i title=paint-source>represents a paint source</i></dt>
+		<dt>The function references an element that is not rendered, but which <i title=paint-source>provides a paint source</i></dt>
 		<dd>The function represents an image with the dimensions and appearance of the <i title=paint-source>paint source</i>.  The host language defines the dimensions and appearance of paint sources.</dd>
 
 		<dt>The function references an element that is not rendered</dt>
@@ -341,7 +341,7 @@
 		<p class=issue>TODO: Create examples of all of the above cases.</p>
 	</div>
 
-	<p>Host languages may define that some elements represent a <dfn title="paint-source">paint source</dfn>.  Paint sources have an intrinsic width, height, and appearance, separate from the process of rendering, and so may be used as images even when they're not being rendered.  Examples of paint sources are the &lt;linearGradient>, &lt;radialGradient>, and &lt;pattern> elements in SVG, or the &lt;img>, &lt;video>, and &lt;canvas> elements in HTML.</p>
+	<p>Host languages may define that some elements provide a <dfn title="paint-source">paint source</dfn>.  Paint sources have an intrinsic width, height, and appearance, separate from the process of rendering, and so may be used as images even when they're not being rendered.  Examples of elements that provide paint sources are the &lt;linearGradient>, &lt;radialGradient>, and &lt;pattern> elements in SVG, or the &lt;img>, &lt;video>, and &lt;canvas> elements in HTML.</p>
 
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Received on Monday, 22 August 2011 23:38:22 UTC