csswg/css3-speech Overview.src.html,1.92,1.93

Update of /sources/public/csswg/css3-speech
In directory hutz:/tmp/cvs-serv18867

Modified Files:
	Overview.src.html 
Log Message:
Minor improvement to text about Last Call in status section. (Can be
removed again if next version isn't a Last Call.) 

Moved style sheet link to after the STYLE element, as required by
pubrules.

Removed redundant HR elements and fixed some mark-up errors.


Index: Overview.src.html
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RCS file: /sources/public/csswg/css3-speech/Overview.src.html,v
retrieving revision 1.92
retrieving revision 1.93
diff -u -d -r1.92 -r1.93
--- Overview.src.html	10 Aug 2011 23:02:36 -0000	1.92
+++ Overview.src.html	16 Aug 2011 12:39:38 -0000	1.93
@@ -2,9 +2,8 @@
 <html lang="en">
   <head>
     <title>CSS Speech Module</title>
-    <meta content="text/html; charset=utf-8" http-equiv="Content-Type" />
-    <link href="../default.css" rel="stylesheet" type="text/css" />
-    <link href="http://www.w3.org/StyleSheets/TR/W3C-ED" rel="stylesheet" type="text/css" />
+    <meta content="text/html; charset=utf-8" http-equiv="Content-Type" >
+    <link href="../default.css" rel="stylesheet" type="text/css" >
     <!-- link rel="stylesheet" type="text/css" href="http://www.w3.org/StyleSheets/TR/W3C-WD.css" -->
     <style type="text/css">
       p
@@ -78,6 +77,7 @@
       font-size : 120%
       }
     -->
+    <link href="http://www.w3.org/StyleSheets/TR/W3C-ED" rel="stylesheet" type="text/css" >
   </head>
   <body>
     <div class="head">
@@ -87,7 +87,7 @@
       <dl>
         <dt>This version:</dt>
         <dd>
-          <!--<a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/[YEAR]/WD-[SHORTNAME]-[CDATE]">[VERSION]</a>-->
+          <!--<a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/[YEAR]/WD-[SHORTNAME]-[CDATE]/">[VERSION]</a>-->
           <a href="http://dev.w3.org/csswg/css3-speech">http://dev.w3.org/csswg/css3-speech</a>
         </dd>
         <dt>Latest version:</dt>
@@ -96,8 +96,8 @@
         </dd>
         <dt>Previous versions:</dt>
         <dd>
-          <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2004/WD-css3-speech-20041216/"
-            >http://www.w3.org/TR/2004/WD-css3-speech-20041216/</a>
+          <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2011/WD-css3-speech-20110419/"
+            >http://www.w3.org/TR/2011/WD-css3-speech-20110419/</a>
         </dd>
         <dt id="editors-list">Editors:</dt>
         <dd><a href="mailto:dsr@w3.org">Dave Raggett</a> (<a href="http://www.w3.org/">W3C</a>/<a
@@ -110,7 +110,7 @@
             Consortium</a>)</dd>
       </dl>
       <!--copyright-->
-      <hr title="Separator for header" />
+      <hr title="Separator for header" >
     </div>
     <h2 class="no-num no-toc" id="abstract">Abstract</h2>
     <p>CSS (Cascading Style Sheets) is a language that describes the rendering of markup documents
@@ -122,9 +122,10 @@
         href="http://www.w3.org/Voice/">Voice Browser Activity</a>.</p>
     <h2 class="no-num no-toc" id="status">Status of this document</h2>
     <!--status-->
-    <p>The <strong>deadline for Last Call Working Draft comments</strong> is <strong>30 September
-        2011</strong>.</p>
-    <hr />
+    <p>This is a “last call” working draft, i.e., the working group
+    expects this to be the last call for comments before the document
+    becomes a W3C Candidate Recommendation.  The <strong>deadline for
+    comments</strong> is <strong>30 September 2011</strong>.</p>
     <!-- div class="issue">
       <p>The following issues need to be discussed and require working group resolutions:</p>
       <ul>
@@ -141,10 +142,8 @@
     <p>The CSS Speech module is a community effort and if you would like to help with implementation
       and driving the specification forward along the W3C Recommendation track, please contact the
       editors.</p>
-    <hr />
     <h2 class="no-num no-toc" id="contents">Table of contents</h2>
     <!--toc-->
-    <hr />
     <h2 id="introduction">Introduction</h2>
     <p class="note">Note that this entire section is non-normative.</p>
     <h3 id="design-goals">Design goals, motivations</h3>
@@ -2409,7 +2408,6 @@
       concerns with the work done by the HTML-Audio and HTML-Speech   
       Incubator Groups.
       </p -->
-    <hr title="Separator from footer" />
     <h2 class="no-num" id="property-index">Appendix A &mdash; Property index</h2>
     <!-- properties -->
     <p>The following properties are defined in other modules or specifications:</p>
@@ -2644,7 +2642,8 @@
       end of the CR period. </p>
     <p>Features may/will also be dropped if adequate/sufficient (by judgment of CSS WG) tests have
       not been produced for those feature(s) by the end of the CR period. </p>
-    <h2 class="no-num" id="ack">Appendix D &mdash; Acknowledgements</h2> The editors would like to
+    <h2 class="no-num" id="ack">Appendix D &mdash; Acknowledgements</h2>
+    <p>The editors would like to
     thank the members of the W3C Voice Browser and Cascading Style Sheets working groups for their
     assistance in preparing this specification. Special thanks to Ellen Eide (IBM) for her detailed
     comments, and to Elika Etemad (Fantasai) for her thorough reviews. <h2 class="no-num"

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