Re: [csswg-drafts] [css-text] Better describe the likely outcomes of hyphenation (editorial) (#5973)

@frivoal i think we're almost done, but here are some final suggestions:

1. Per the discussion in [this comment](https://github.com/w3c/csswg-drafts/issues/5973#issuecomment-1476671189), I would like to add one more line to the Hyphenation Across Languages examples, to show a hyphenation mark in LTR text that is clearly not a hyphen.  I suggest using the svg images for Plains Cree at the bottom of this comment field.
2. I don't think it helps much to have to expand example 16 to view it – the table isn't huge, so i'd remove the details tag.
3. The first para in 5.4 says "and **visually indicating the split** (usually by inserting a hyphen, U+2010)" (my emphasis).  My view is that, even though we call this 'hyphenation', that is a western bias, and 'hyphenation' actually relates to splitting of words to fit on a line, and doesn't necessarily indicate that there needs to be a visual indicator. For example, Malayalam needs hyphenation rules but uses no visual indicator – see [an example](https://r12a.github.io/scripts/mlym/ml.html#hyphenation). I think the text could say "usually indicating the split", or we could drop that phrase.


SVG images for Cree example:

![kasitaniwaninik](https://github.com/w3c/csswg-drafts/assets/4839211/18f49175-78a5-4e70-af1e-5d514abed80e)
![kasitani-](https://github.com/w3c/csswg-drafts/assets/4839211/cacf83fd-0d00-4207-9f92-c032e6f089f3)
![waninik](https://github.com/w3c/csswg-drafts/assets/4839211/9fdd750f-9253-42fa-94bd-f8d08a144906)






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