- From: Lachlan Hunt <lachlan.hunt@lachy.id.au>
- Date: Sat, 27 May 2006 22:57:13 +1000
- To: public-comments-wcag20@w3.org
Commenter: Lachlan Hunt
Email: lachlan.hunt[at]lachy.id.au
Affiliation: N/A
Date: 2006-05-27
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COMMENT 1
1) W2
2) Abstract
3) N/A
4) E
5) Poor use of grammar in the following sentence. "usable to" should be
changed to "usable by".
"Accessible" means usable to a wide range of people with
disabilities...
6) "Accessible" means usable [by] a wide range of people with
disabilities...
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COMMENT 2
1) W2
2) Introduction
3) N/A
4) E
5) Poor use of grammar in the following sentence. "usable to" should be
changed to "usable by".
Following these guidelines will also make your Web content
more usable to many other users, including...
6) Following these guidelines will also make your Web content
more usable [by] many other users, including...
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COMMENT 3
1) W2
2) Related Documents
3) Application Notes
4) E
5) Remove the extraneous comma before the word "and" from the following
sentence:
For example, an application note on forms will provide a collection
of techniques, and strategies for creating accessible forms.
6) For example, an application note on forms will provide a collection
of techniques and strategies for creating accessible forms.
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COMMENT 4
1) W2
2) The Four Principles of Accessibility
3) N/A
4) E
5) Remove the extraneous comma before the word "and" from the following
sentence:
WCAG 2.0 offers information about how to increase the ability of
people with disabilities to perceive, operate, and understand Web
content.
6) WCAG 2.0 offers information about how to increase the ability of
people with disabilities to perceive, operate and understand Web
content.
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Lachlan Hunt
http://lachy.id.au/
Received on Saturday, 27 May 2006 12:57:35 UTC