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Editorial Comments on WCAG 2.0

From: Lachlan Hunt <lachlan.hunt@lachy.id.au>
Date: Sat, 27 May 2006 22:57:13 +1000
Message-ID: <44784CA9.40004@lachy.id.au>
To: public-comments-wcag20@w3.org

Commenter: Lachlan Hunt

Email: lachlan.hunt[at]lachy.id.au

Affiliation: N/A

Date: 2006-05-27

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COMMENT 1

1) W2

2) Abstract

3) N/A

4) E

5) Poor use of grammar in the following sentence. "usable to" should be
    changed to "usable by".

    "Accessible" means usable to a wide range of people with
     disabilities...

6) "Accessible" means usable [by] a wide range of people with
    disabilities...

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COMMENT 2

1) W2

2) Introduction

3) N/A

4) E

5) Poor use of grammar in the following sentence. "usable to" should be
    changed to "usable by".

    Following these guidelines will also make your Web content
    more usable to many other users, including...

6) Following these guidelines will also make your Web content
    more usable [by] many other users, including...

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COMMENT 3

1) W2

2) Related Documents


3) Application Notes

4) E

5) Remove the extraneous comma before the word "and" from the following
    sentence:

    For example, an application note on forms will provide a collection
    of techniques, and strategies for creating accessible forms.

6) For example, an application note on forms will provide a collection
    of techniques and strategies for creating accessible forms.

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COMMENT 4

1) W2

2) The Four Principles of Accessibility

3) N/A

4) E

5) Remove the extraneous comma before the word "and" from the following
    sentence:

    WCAG 2.0 offers information about how to increase the ability of
    people with disabilities to perceive, operate, and understand Web
    content.

6) WCAG 2.0 offers information about how to increase the ability of
    people with disabilities to perceive, operate and understand Web
    content.

-- 
Lachlan Hunt
http://lachy.id.au/
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