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WCAG 2.0 Comment Submission

From: WCAG 2.0 Comment Form <nobody@w3.org>
Date: Fri, 23 Jun 2006 04:12:18 +0000 (UTC)
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Name: Judy Brewer
Email: jbrewer@w3.org
Affiliation: W3C/WAI, on behalf of the Education and Outreach Working Group
Document: UW
Item Number: intro
Part of Item: Intent
Comment Type: editorial
Comment (Including rationale for any proposed change):
[ignore the \"part of item\" -- not relevant, but can\'t deselect]

(Helpful detail in \"Understanding WCAG 2.0.\" EOWG sends its compliments) 

Purpose of the document unclear. 

 requiring a simple introduction.

Proposed Change:
The Introduction needs an opening statement along the lines of \"this is not an introductory document - it is a detailed description of the guidelines and their success criteria\" and adds a pointer to the \"Overview\"

document for people
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