- From: WCAG 2.0 Comment Form <nobody@w3.org>
- Date: Fri, 23 Jun 2006 03:54:37 +0000 (GMT)
- To: public-comments-wcag20@w3.org
Name: Judy Brewer Email: jbrewer@w3.org Affiliation: W3C/WAI, on behalf of the Education and Outreach Working Group Document: W2 Item Number: new-terms Part of Item: Comment Type: editorial Comment (Including rationale for any proposed change): The penultimate paragraph (\"Several success criteria require...\") is difficult to understand and contains more detail than seems necessary or appropriate for an introduction. Proposed Change: Copyedit to clarify and simplify.
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