WCAG 2.0 Comment Submission

Name: Judy Brewer
Email: jbrewer@w3.org
Affiliation: W3C/WAI, on behalf of the Education and Outreach Working Group
Document: W2
Item Number: new-terms
Part of Item: 
Comment Type: editorial
Comment (Including rationale for any proposed change):
The penultimate paragraph (\"Several success criteria require...\") is difficult to understand and contains more detail than seems necessary or appropriate for an introduction. 







Proposed Change:
Copyedit to clarify and simplify.

Received on Friday, 23 June 2006 03:54:48 UTC