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WCAG 2.0 Comment Submission

From: WCAG 2.0 Comment Form <nobody@w3.org>
Date: Fri, 23 Jun 2006 03:54:37 +0000 (GMT)
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Name: Judy Brewer
Email: jbrewer@w3.org
Affiliation: W3C/WAI, on behalf of the Education and Outreach Working Group
Document: W2
Item Number: new-terms
Part of Item: 
Comment Type: editorial
Comment (Including rationale for any proposed change):
The penultimate paragraph (\"Several success criteria require...\") is difficult to understand and contains more detail than seems necessary or appropriate for an introduction. 

Proposed Change:
Copyedit to clarify and simplify.
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