- From: WCAG 2.0 Comment Form <nobody@w3.org>
- Date: Thu, 22 Jun 2006 21:06:09 +0000 (GMT)
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Name: Shawn Henry Email: shawn@w3.org Affiliation: W3C WAI Document: W2 Item Number: acknowledgements Part of Item: Comment Type: general comment Comment (Including rationale for any proposed change): Editorial suggestions Proposed Change: note: some similar suggestions for other appendices and so any changes should be synched suggestion: Use “Informative” rather than “Non-Normative” and link “informative” to the glossary definition. Consider deleting one of them – either from the <h1> or from the first sentence. If leave first sentence, change to “Appendix C: Acknowledgements is informative.” suggestion: remove “C.1” and “C.2” from the <h2>s (rationale: simpler, friendlier, less formal) suggestion: clean up top matter (\"Quick Table of Contents\" extraneous? \" Appendix C: Acknowledgements\" repetitive with <h1> and links to self) question: should the <title> and the <h1> match, or be more similar? question: should WCAG WG be spelled out? (yes, if consider this separate document, no if consider this a section of large document where it is spelled out in first reference) suggestion: consider linking WCAG WG to www.w3.org.WAI/GL/
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