WCAG 2.0 Comment Submission

Name: Shawn Henry
Email: shawn@w3.org
Affiliation: W3C WAI
Document: W2
Item Number: acknowledgements
Part of Item: 
Comment Type: general comment
Comment (Including rationale for any proposed change):
Editorial suggestions

Proposed Change:
note: some similar suggestions for other appendices and so any changes should be synched



suggestion: Use “Informative” rather than “Non-Normative” and link “informative” to the glossary definition. Consider deleting one of them – either from the <h1> or from the first sentence. If leave first sentence, change to “Appendix C: Acknowledgements is informative.” 



suggestion: remove “C.1” and “C.2” from the <h2>s (rationale: simpler, friendlier, less formal)



suggestion: clean up top matter (\"Quick Table of Contents\" extraneous? \" Appendix C: Acknowledgements\" repetitive with <h1> and links to self) 



question: should the <title> and the <h1> match, or be more similar? 



question: should WCAG WG be spelled out? (yes, if consider this separate document, no if consider this a section of large document where it is spelled out in first reference)



suggestion: consider linking WCAG WG to www.w3.org.WAI/GL/

Received on Thursday, 22 June 2006 21:06:16 UTC