- From: Karen Mardahl <karen@mardahl.dk>
- Date: Thu, 22 Jun 2006 18:03:57 +0200
- To: public-comments-wcag20@w3.org
Dear WCAG Working Group Members, This is a response to the Web Content Accessibility Guidelines 2.0 (WCAG 2.0) from the Accessibility Special Interest Group (AccessAbility SIG) of the Society for Technical Communication (STC). Although this response is being sent by the leadership of the AccessAbility SIG, it represents the work of a subcommittee on behalf of the entire special interest group. All AccessAbility SIG members are technical authors, and many are web users with disabilities, some are usability practitioners, and some are web accessibility experts. As such, the group has particular expertise with both web accessibility and document design, as well as having first-hand experience of the issues web users with disabilities face. We know that WCAG 2.0 is the result of hard work by a lot of people for a long time, and we appreciate these efforts. However, the AccessAbility SIG would like to express its concerns regarding the current WCAG 2.0 document and to offer our assistance with re-thinking, re-structuring, and re-writing the accompanying documents. We feel that the information in the supporting documents is very difficult to use and needs significant restructuring in order to be meaningful to the target audiences. The Working Group has indicated that the deadline for review of the WCAG documents should focus on the WCAG 2.0 guidelines themselves, and that the supporting documents ("Understanding WCAG 2.0" and "Techniques for WCAG 2.0") do not have a deadline for comments, although reviewers "may find them helpful in understanding or implementing the provisions in the guidelines." The guidelines in the WCAG 2.0 document comprise approximately 10 pages in a documentation set that is well over 650 printed pages. Unfortunately, we feel that it is impossible to assess or approve the guidelines in the main document without reviewing the supporting documents in full, a daunting task at best. We recommend extending the deadline further and including commentary on the entire set of documents as a unit. GOALS OF WCAG 2.0 The goals of WCAG 2.0 are laudable. As stated in "Overview of WCAG 2.0 Documents" (http://www.w3.org/WAI/intro/wcag20.php): "WCAG 2.0 is being developed to apply to different Web technologies, be easier to use and understand, and be more precisely testable, as documented in Requirements for WCAG 2.0." According to the "Requirements for WCAG 2.0", W3C Working Group Note 25 April 2006 (http://www.w3.org/TR/wcag2-req/): (begin quotation) The primary goal of WCAG 2.0 is the same as 1.0: to promote accessibility of Web content. Additional goals discussed in this document are: 1. Ensure that requirements may be applied across technologies 2. Ensure that the conformance requirements are clear 3. Design deliverables with ease of use in mind 4. Write to a more diverse audience 5. Clearly identify who benefits from accessible content 6. Ensure that the revision is "backwards and forward compatible" (end quotation) ANALYSIS Although we agree that general technical standards can be useful, the target audiences (web authors, web developers, policy makers and managers) need first and foremost practical guidance which relates to their tasks. We suggest reconsidering both the concept and the writing of the WCAG 2.0. The users of the WCAG 2.0 will benefit enormously if the WCAG Working Group (WG) could consider: - Ensuring that the structure of the document and the language are accessible and easy to understand for target audiences. - Re-thinking the purpose and focusing on providing practical guidance to the target audiences. Our main concerns: 1. The concept of the WCAG 2.0: the WCAG 2.0 "tries to be everything to everybody for all time"--as a result, the guidelines are too general and lack practicality. The Requirements document for WCAG 2.0 (http://www.w3.org/TR/wcag2-req/, under point 4 "Write to a more diverse audience") defines the different users of the WCAG and the tasks these users will be performing for which they will need guidance from the WCAG 2.0. These tasks are very concrete and--as practitioners experienced in document design--we firmly believe the current WCAG 2.0 will not be helpful to these users in achieving their goals. We also believe that the WCAG 2.0 guidelines need to be more measurable as well as testable to enable heuristic evaluation as part of accessibility assessments. 2. The writing of the WCAG 2.0: structure, language, and navigational structure make the document hard to understand and navigate. Again referring to the Requirements document, point 3 states "Design deliverables with ease of use in mind". Based on our experience as technical authors, we are convinced that the current WCAG 2.0 will be very hard to use by the target audiences. Unfortunately, WCAG 2.0 is not easier to use and understand than WCAG 1.0. The primary goal of promoting accessibility has been all but lost for the practitioners of web content accessibility because of problematic goals, complexity of language, and the cumbersome organization of the documents that has evolved over time. Goals: In our opinion, there are three goals that need to be reconsidered to make WCAG 2.0 more effective: 1. Ensuring that the revision is forward compatible--while a good guiding principle for the authors of WCAG itself--should not be made part of the guidelines for people needing to apply the technologies today. Trying to make guidelines anticipate the future is a serious problem and can only result in vague guidelines. Since no one can predict what the future will hold, the guidelines should address today's technologies and be updated as the future unfolds. 2. The Conformance section needs to be totally reconsidered. The conformance levels are difficult to interpret, will discourage compliance, and will give web developers a false sense that they have mastered them when they have not. 3. Although individual guidelines are more testable in terms of true or false statements, the ability to draw those conclusions has become more difficult. Heuristic evaluation has been made significantly more difficult than before. Writing: We also consider the style and language of the WCAG 2.0 central document to be difficult to understand and assimilate by the target audience. Rather than serving diverse audiences, few people will be able to understand the guidelines. The conformance requirements and glossary are particularly unclear. The conformance section is difficult to read, and the language is confusing due to the use of jargon. We would highly recommend rewriting this section at a lower reading level in addition to reconsidering the principles. Organization: We would recommend placing the majority of the Conformance section after the guidelines, not before, so that people actually reach the guidelines without getting bogged down, and limiting the information that precedes the guidelines to a brief description of the conformance levels. The design deliverables are not easy to use. Trying to cover all technologies at once requires so much explanation and so many examples that the guidelines have expanded to three documents of over 650 printed pages. The material is highly repetitive, as well as difficult to navigate. We recommend a restructuring of the accompanying documents by technology, or by target audience. For a more detailed analysis, please refer to an article in the STC's technical journal by members of the AccessAbility SIG: "Communication Challenges in the W3C's Web Content Accessibility Guidelines", Catherine M. Brys and Wim Vanderbauwhede, Technical Communication, February 2006 (Volume 53, Number 1), pp. 60-78 (19). [1] CONCLUSION We strongly recommend that the WCAG Working Group re-consider the concepts, the writing, and the organization of WCAG 2.0 before making the entire set of documents a W3C Recommendation. We feel that it is impossible to assess or approve the guidelines in the main document without the supporting documents. We think that the WCAG 2.0 lack practicality and that the writing of the supporting documents needs to be reconsidered. We raise these issues and offer our assistance because we believe that--if the final draft of the WCAG 2.0 becomes a W3C recommendation as it stands--people with disabilities will lose out. Confusion and misinterpretation will lead to less accessible web sites. Complicated and hard-to-use guidelines will alienate web developers and prevent them from trying to achieve web accessibility. We believe that the AccessAbility SIG is well-placed to assist with revisions to the WCAG 2.0 and its accompanying documents. The accessibility of web content for people with disabilities worldwide is at stake. Best regards, Karen Mardahl, Lisa Pappas, Mike Murray, Dan Voss, Fabien Vais Incoming and Outgoing Co-Managers on behalf of the AccessAbility SIG of STC http://www.stcsig.org/sn [1] For reference, a partially accessible PDF of the Technical Communication article is available at http://www.stcsig.org/sn/PDF/WCAG2.0_Communication_Challenges_TC_Feb_2006.pdf (1593 kB). Since we only have access to the published article and not the source material, we tagged the document so that the text is substantially available. However, many of the links and some of the other details could not be made accessible in time for the Working Group submission deadline. (This merely illustrates a general problem in the electronic publishing world--many major journals provide their articles as non-accessible PDFs, often even scanned copies of printed versions, which are totally inaccessible and even hard to read when printed.) Although this article discusses an earlier draft of the WCAG 2.0, most of the principles still apply.
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