RE: Action: Final User Story Review

I have finished with my editing of the Google doc for the moment!  https://docs.google.com/document/d/1xmmQkuZLEG014zDRVkgr3QLyINb7BNvWxqL7POn6Ei8/edit?pli=1#<https://docs.google.com/document/d/1xmmQkuZLEG014zDRVkgr3QLyINb7BNvWxqL7POn6Ei8/edit?pli=1>

I have added several comments and changed some wording, corrected typos, but at the end Rachael asked if the final list could be adapted.  I have done this, but I am aware that with each of the other objectives that have "This includes:" the list items start with "I can…" "I need…" or "I want…" etc.

You will now notice a difference with Objective 8 and a decision needs to be made as to which style we adopt.

Many thanks.

Best wishes
E.A.

Mrs E.A. Draffan
WAIS, ECS , University of Southampton
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From: Rachael Bradley Montgomery [mailto:rachael@accessiblecommunity.org]
Sent: 21 November 2019 18:31
To: public-cognitive-a11y-tf <public-cognitive-a11y-tf@w3.org>
Subject: Action: Final User Story Review

Hello,

Please take a look over the next few days at the Updated User Story Document<https://eur03.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fdocs.google.com%2Fdocument%2Fd%2F1xmmQkuZLEG014zDRVkgr3QLyINb7BNvWxqL7POn6Ei8%2Fedit%3Fpli%3D1%23&data=01%7C01%7Cead%40ecs.soton.ac.uk%7C931a7b6c489c4b536fde08d76eb0ffed%7C4a5378f929f44d3ebe89669d03ada9d8%7C0&sdata=XnIql9RvRSthZby%2FmCDwYaDuzm4EH2yOWsn%2F750BEkQ%3D&reserved=0>. EA will be editing it but any suggestions are helpful.

Lisa and I will begin mapping these stories back to the Content Usable and Persona Documents on Sunday (24 November 2019).

Thank you,

Rachael

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Rachael Montgomery, PhD
Director, Accessible Community
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