Content Usable Proposed Change to Section 3

Hello,
I am proposing edits to section 3 of the Content Usable document for discussion by the group.  I believe the text can be more concise.  Content wise, I believe section 3 is trying to emphasize that everyone should use the design document and that usability testing should include people with disabilities, particularly for certain organizations.
Please respond to the group with your thoughts on the change below.
Thank you,
Rachael
Section 3: Applicability across websites
Current text:
How much effort an organization should expend on making a website friendly for people with cognitive impairments will vary. For organizations that provide public services, or are national (or international) private service providers and already conduct user-research, they should:
*        Include people with learning and cognitive disabilities as part of user research such as usability-testing;
*        Review designs and early stage development with the design themes in this document.
For organizations that do not include usability testing as part of the process, they could use this document to review designs and implementations.
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Proposed text:
The amount of effort an organization should expend on making a website friendly for people with cognitive impairments will vary. Organizations that conduct user research should include people with learning and cognitive disabilities as part of user research such as usability-testing. This is particularly important for public service providers as well as national and international private service providers.
All organizations, regardless of user research conducted, should review designs and early stage development with the design themes in this document.
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