Fwd: Re: Exploring potential wording solutions for tomorrow's discussion

Some proposed wording from Andrew for the introduction to WCAG
      OK, I’ve taken a crack at this in a couple of ways:   1)  This version (https://rawgit.com/w3c/wcag21/intro-dits-coga/guidelines/) includes: ·         “more” in the second sentence of the abstract. No other changes to the abstract. ·         Moved the “User Support” section to be higher in the introduction. https://rawgit.com/w3c/wcag21/intro-dits-coga/guidelines/#user-support-in-wcag-2-1 ·         Reworked the second paragraph to incorporate more of Lisa’s text but link to a general WCAG resources page.   2)  This version (https://rawgit.com/w3c/wcag21/intro-dits-coga2/guidelines/) includes: ·         “more” in the second sentence of the abstract. Also added “ for people with disabilities” to the second to last sentence of the first paragraph. ·         Moved the “User Support” section to be higher in the introduction. https://rawgit.com/w3c/wcag21/intro-dits-coga2/guidelines/#user-support-in-wcag-2-1 ·         Reworked the second paragraph to incorporate more of Lisa’s text and included links to as-yet-undefined pages for mobile/coga/low vision.   Thoughts?   AWK