RE: Timed Events SC For Review

I think it should probably be the first option?

Best regards

Mike

From: EA Draffan [mailto:ead@ecs.soton.ac.uk]
Sent: 26 September 2016 13:27
To: lisa.seeman <lisa.seeman@zoho.com>; Thad C <inclusivethinking@gmail.com>; public-cognitive-a11y-tf <public-cognitive-a11y-tf@w3.org>
Subject: RE: Timed Events SC For Review

Thank you so much Thad for giving me a chance to see how it should be done.   Here am I being a bit picky as it looks so good so I apologise in advance.

I have just one query as a point of guidance for developers etc and I may have missed the answer - how long or short is 'shorter' in "Where financial or sensitive information<http://rawgit.com/w3c/coga/master/extension/timed-events.html#dt-sensitive-information> is at risk the time out can be shorter.@@"


"Timing adjustable: The function to turn off, adjust or extend the timing are controlled by simple action …"

could possibly be

"Timing adjustable: The functions to turn off, adjust or extend the timing are controlled by simple actions …"

or

" Timing adjustable: The function to turn off, adjust or extend the timing is controlled by a simple action …"

"The the user is allowed to extend the time…" - delete the extra 'the'


Many thanks once again.


Best wishes
E.A.

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From: lisa.seeman [mailto:lisa.seeman@zoho.com]
Sent: 25 September 2016 19:45
To: Thad C <inclusivethinking@gmail.com<mailto:inclusivethinking@gmail.com>>; public-cognitive-a11y-tf <public-cognitive-a11y-tf@w3.org<mailto:public-cognitive-a11y-tf@w3.org>>
Subject: Timed Events SC For Review

I think http://rawgit.com/w3c/coga/master/extension/timed-events.html is ready for WCAG review

Does everyone agree?

Thanks again Thaddeus for the great work.

All the best

Lisa Seeman

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