Good change. Mike From: Rochford, John [mailto:john.rochford@umassmed.edu] Sent: 16 October 2016 16:20 To: public-cognitive-a11y-tf@w3.org Subject: SC copyediting Hi Lisa and All, I copyedited the accessible authentication SC<https://github.com/w3c/coga/blob/master/extension/accessible-authentication.html> and the safety SC<https://github.com/w3c/coga/blob/master/extension/safety.html>. In the former, the only significant change I made is that I replaced: "Many user authentication methods rely upon trying to differentiate between a human, and software that tries to hijack a user's identity (robots)." with "Many user authentication methods rely upon trying to differentiate between a human, and software (bots) that try to pose as a human." John John Rochford<http://profiles.umassmed.edu/profiles/display/132901> UMass Medical School/E.K. Shriver Center Director, INDEX Program Instructor, Family Medicine & Community Health www.DisabilityInfo.org Twitter: @ClearHelper<https://twitter.com/clearhelper> Confidentiality Notice: This e-mail message, including any attachments, is for the sole use of the intended recipient(s) and may contain confidential, proprietary, and privileged information. Any unauthorized review, use, disclosure, or distribution is prohibited. If you are not the intended recipient, please contact the sender immediately and destroy or permanently delete all copies of the original message. ________________________________
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