RE: feedback about table of user needs

Are we allowed to edit the typos / spellings etc as I am happy to go through that aspect if it helps.

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E.A.

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From: Rochford, John [mailto:john.rochford@umassmed.edu]
Sent: 16 May 2016 23:44
To: lisa.seeman@zoho.com
Cc: public-cognitive-a11y-tf@w3.org
Subject: feedback about table of user needs

Hi Lisa,

I think the gap analysis table of user needs<https://rawgit.com/w3c/coga/master/gap-analysis/table.html#table1> describes the issues well, primarily because of the efficient way the columns frame them. I also think that, before we are ready to share the table, we should fix the typographical issues, and especially the grammatical ones. For example, "Techniques should include how to have security that does use passwords or copying such as biometrics and tokens" should be written as "Techniques should include how to have security, such as biometrics and tokens, which do not use passwords or copying".

John

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