- From: Richard Schwerdtfeger <richschwer@gmail.com>
- Date: Wed, 10 Feb 2016 16:52:35 -0600
- To: Kurt Mattes <kurt.mattes@deque.com>
- Cc: public-cognitive-a11y-tf <public-cognitive-a11y-tf@w3.org>
- Message-Id: <8A7A91C1-9F46-47DD-A9A4-43EB3EC6B9BB@gmail.com>
This needs more editing before it goes out. The text inc column one in many of the tables wraps way to much and is distracting to view. The text should be simplified or the column widened. The components of the gap need to be clear and easily understood. Specifically Table 1 and 8 are really bad. Table 6 has the To do stuck up against the bottom of the table and a bunch of white space. Section 3.6 introduces the term WOT which I assume means Web of Things but it is a term that is not defined. There is A LOT MORE editorial work needed before publication. The group does not need to get in the middle of that editorial work but it really should be cleaned up be for publishing. Thank you Lisa and the team for pulling this together. > On Feb 10, 2016, at 2:02 PM, Kurt Mattes <kurt.mattes@deque.com> wrote: > > Approve > > On Wed, Feb 10, 2016 at 1:49 PM, Steve Lee <steve@opendirective.com <mailto:steve@opendirective.com>> wrote: > I approve > > Sent from Outlook Mobile <https://aka.ms/blhgte> > > > > On Wed, Feb 10, 2016 at 10:43 AM -0800, "lisa.seeman" <lisa.seeman@zoho.com <mailto:lisa.seeman@zoho.com>> wrote: > > Hi Folks > We need a consensus if the draft at https://rawgit.com/w3c/coga/master/gap-analysis/ <https://rawgit.com/w3c/coga/master/gap-analysis/> should be a first working draft and I should take it to the parent working groups. > > Can you send you approval or conditions / changes that are needed for your approval? > > All the best > > Lisa Seeman > > Athena ICT Accessibility Projects <http://accessibility.athena-ict.com/> > LinkedIn <http://il.linkedin.com/in/lisaseeman/>, Twitter <https://twitter.com/SeemanLisa> > > > > > > -- > Regards, > Kurt Mattes > Senior Accessibility Consultant - Deque Systems > 610-368-1539
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