EO's Ian script: COGA input needed by this Monday at 6pm ET

Hi, folks, this is the third of four scripts with consolidated COGA
feedback that we're asking you to review before we send it to EO, and this
version incorporates suggestions from Rain based on her lived experience.

*Your Ian input is needed by this Monday, September 19, at 6pm ET:*
Please review this Ian script
<https://docs.google.com/document/d/1YH11OBMa0Cb82w6dhRJLeNXe19R96UX5zdF6SP_z78w/edit?usp=sharing>
and use margin comments:

   - If you have any objections to the changes we’re suggesting in red or
   to the explanations for these changes, or
   - If you think something essential is missing from EO's script and/or
   our feedback.


*Background (same background as in the Preety and Luis emails):*
COGA had a good meeting on Monday with Shadi from EO. He asked us to submit
consolidated feedback via Github, instead of asynchronously filling out
EO's survey. We agreed to his request.

To meet EO's 9/26 deadline, COGA has spent several hours at TPAC discussing
the 4 EO scripts that involve cognitive and learning disabilities. We will
send each of the 4 scripts out as soon as they are ready and will try to
give you two days to respond to each one.

Thanks so much for COGA's flexibility as we hustle to meet EO's very tight
deadline, which is based on the need to finish producing this video series
by the end of the year or else lose the funding for it.

Thanks again,
Julie


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Julie Rawe

Special Projects Editor, Editorial Content, Understood

E: jrawe@understood.org

Pronounced Joo-lee Raw (like 'uncooked')

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