- From: Alan Chuter <achuter@technosite.es>
- Date: Wed, 28 Nov 2007 14:24:05 +0100
- To: "MWI BPWG Public" <public-bpwg@w3.org>
On 28/11/2007, Miguel Garcia <miguel.garcia@fundacionctic.org> wrote:
> In section "1.1 Abstract." the first paragraph looks to me a, in a first
> glance, bit confusing and I needed to read it twice. I think we could
> start this section straight with the second paragraph ("Many Web
> sites...") and move the other paragraph to the bottom and restructure it
> like a list. Something like:
> "* if you are a mobile...."
> "* if you have a dissability..."
> "* if you work..."
I would like to discuss this further with the WAI Education & Outreach
WG as well.
regards,
Alan
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