Re: [CT-Guidelines LC] (Editorial) Difficult to understand ( LC-2012)

 Dear JOSE MANUEL CANTERA FONSECA ,

The Mobile Web Best Practices Working Group has reviewed the comments you
sent [1] on the Last Call Working Draft [2] of the Content Transformation
Guidelines 1.0 published on 1 Aug 2008. Thank you for having taken the time
to review the document and to send us comments!

The Working Group's response to your comment is included below, and has
been implemented in the new version of the document available at:
http://www.w3.org/TR/2009/WD-ct-guidelines-20091006/.

Please review it carefully and let us know by email at
public-bpwg-comments@w3.org if you agree with it or not before 6 November
2009. In case of disagreement, you are requested to provide a specific
solution for or a path to a consensus with the Working Group. If such a
consensus cannot be achieved, you will be given the opportunity to raise a
formal objection which will then be reviewed by the Director during the
transition of this document to the next stage in the W3C Recommendation
Track.

Thanks,

For the Mobile Web Best Practices Working Group,
Dominique Hazaël-Massieux
François Daoust
W3C Staff Contacts

 1.
http://www.w3.org/mid/93AA9E47B82F684A868C217766F48905374C6CCE3C@EXCLU2K7.hi.inet
 2. http://www.w3.org/TR/2008/WD-ct-guidelines-20080801/


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Your comment on 1 Introduction (Non-Normative):
> Introduction
> 
> "From the point of view of this document, Content Transformation is the
> manipulation in various ways, by proxies, of requests made to and
> content delivered by an origin server with a view to making it more
> suitable for mobile presentation."
> 
> It took me three times to read the sentence in order to understand it.
> I think the sentence can be simplified
> 
> Proposed Amendment
> 
> Convert the sentence in something clearer.


Working Group Resolution (LC-2012):
The introduction was reworded in terms of user experience.



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Received on Tuesday, 6 October 2009 15:34:27 UTC