- From: Richard Ishida <ishida@w3.org>
- Date: Fri, 7 Jul 2006 08:15:10 +0100
- To: <public-bpwg-comments@w3.org>
- Cc: "'Richard Ishida'" <ishida@w3.org>
I feel the presentation of the free-standing summary of statements could be improved. I find the text on the blue/green background much harder to read than the blue text on white background. For people scanning, that is exactly the wrong way around, I think. In fact, even when trying to read in detail, I keep finding my eye pulled away from the actual statements to the - what are those, anyway? I would be inclined to make this into a proper list <ol>, remove the background highlight, or at least significantly lighten it, make the text itself the link, and move the capitalized text to the end of the list item. Also, add a (v brief) description of what the capitalized stuff is to the page. Hope that helps, RI ============ Richard Ishida Internationalization Lead W3C (World Wide Web Consortium) http://www.w3.org/People/Ishida/ http://www.w3.org/International/ http://people.w3.org/rishida/blog/ http://www.flickr.com/photos/ishida/
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