Re: Paris BioHackathon proposal

I just went in and made some more modifications, resolved a bunch of
comments, and rephrased the 'discussion' bit.
There are 1-2 minor comments left, which can just be resolved as is I
think, but I leave that up to you,

cheers

Nick

On Wed, May 23, 2018 at 1:11 PM, Gray, Alasdair J G <A.J.G.Gray@hw.ac.uk>
wrote:

> It seems that we still have some discussions on the text in the document.
> I’ve done another pass, but have not been able to resolve all the issues.
>
> Leyla, Justin, Nick, do you have time to do another look over the document?
>
> I would like to try to get it submitted by 3pm (BST) today.
>
> Alasdair
>
> On 22 May 2018, at 20:02, Nick Juty <nsjuty@gmail.com> wrote:
>
> I've just added some comments, and suggested a few modifications,
> Thanks for all the work on this,
>
> cheers
>
> Nick
>
> On Tue, May 22, 2018 at 4:04 PM, Gray, Alasdair J G <A.J.G.Gray@hw.ac.uk>
> wrote:
>
>> Hi
>>
>> I have redrafted the background again.
>>
>> Justin, I’d appreciate any revisions to the expected outcomes that would
>> add more emphasis to what you feel is lost. I’ve separated out the
>> insertion of the new text from the removal of the old text so that we can
>> use suggestions to help improve the content.
>>
>> Alasdair
>>
>> On 22 May 2018, at 15:55, Justin Clark-Casey <jc955@cam.ac.uk> wrote:
>>
>> Hi Leyla,
>>
>> I think Alasdair is in the process of redrafting this to take the
>> comments into account.
>> On 22/05/18 15:49, ljgarcia wrote:
>>
>> Hi Justin,
>> We still have about 100 characters in the expected outcomes (after
>> Alasdair's changes). Could you please have a look and see if you can add
>> something else that will aligned better to your expectations? Thanks!
>> Regards,
>> On 2018-05-22 15:28, LJ Garcia Castro wrote:
>>
>> Hi Alasdair,
>>
>> Thanks for the suggestions. I am leaving the proposal with you as main
>> applicant so please make sure it is submitted on time. Deadline is May
>> the 23rd.
>>
>> Justin and I have added some comments to your editions. Please see how
>> they can be best addressed. A last chance to comment/approve would be
>> nice.
>>
>> I also removed identifiers.org as a possible registry as other options
>> are also out there (as mentioned in one of the comments). I would say
>> we could have multiple registries as far as all of them are consistent
>> and serve the same underlying content. I suppose they will be marked
>> up following Bioschemas recommendations so it could work. Something
>> that we could discuss later.
>>  Regards,
>>
>> On 22/05/2018 14:48, Gray, Alasdair J G wrote:
>>
>> Hi Leyla, All,
>>
>> Thanks for making such a good start on this. I have gone through the
>> form sections to give them more of a focus on what we need to
>> achieve as a community, and to bring the various sections under the
>> word count. Please review my suggestions and see if you agree.
>>
>> I have put myself in as the main point of contact, but this is
>> really a group effort.
>>
>> Best regards
>>
>> Alasdair
>>
>> On 21 May 2018, at 10:30, LJ Garcia Castro <ljgarcia@ebi.ac.uk>
>> wrote:
>> Dear all,
>>
>> The proposal for the Paris BioHackthon is available at
>>
>>
>> https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Q2SL2jHWwmhK-T57YyPmViq1
>> zifKT1bEtiZUTuheNQA/edit
>>
>>
>>
>> Thanks all for your comments, suggestions and editions. Still some
>> things to finish up. Deadline in Wed the 23rd of May.
>>
>> @Alasdair, @Carole, @Rafael, could you please choose a name for
>> the main contact person?
>>
>> @Justin, please resolve those comments that you created and have
>> been clarified/resolved already so we can focus on those still
>> pending.
>>
>> @Alasdair, @Dominique, @Justin, @Melanie Could you please confirm
>> whether you want to be named as leaders here?
>>
>> @everybody. Would any of you prefer to send a separate proposal
>> focus on some specific aspect of Bioschemas? If so, please let us
>> know and remove any related text from this current all-in-one
>> Bioschemas proposal.
>>
>>
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