DID 中英译文反馈

你好，我是胡楠。建议如下：

*1，【3.2.2 相对DID URL】/【3.2.2 Relative DID URLs】*

1.1 建议将中文标题和英文保持统一，中文改为【3.2.2 相对DID URLs】

1.2 建议第一段的中文和英文保持一致
中文原文：
一个相对DID URL是DID 文档中不以`did::`开头的任何URL值。更具体地说，它是任何不以3.1 DID
语法中定义的ABNF开头的URL值。URL应引用同一个 DID 文档中的资源。相对 DID
URLs可能包含相对路径（path）组件、查询（query）参数和片段（fragment）标识符。
修改为：
一个相对DID URL是DID
文档中不以`did:<method-name>:<method-specific-id>`开头的任何URL值。更具体地说，它是任何不以3.1 DID
语法中定义的ABNF开头的URL值。URL应引用同一个 DID 文档中的资源。相对 DID
URLs可能包含相对路径（path）组件、查询（query）参数和片段（fragment）标识符。
说明：
我注意到第二段讲授权时，用到了【授权是<method-name>:<method-specific-id>的组合】这样的表达，并且英文的第一段用了【start
with did:<method-name>:<method-specific-id>】，建议保持一致。

1.3 建议将英文的第三段做修改
英文原文：
Relative DID URLs are often used to reference verification methods and
services in a DID Document without having to use absolute URLs. DID methods
where storage size is a consideration might use relative URLs to reduce the
storage size of DID documents.
修改为：
Relative DID URLs are typically used to retrieve/reference verification
methods and services in a DID Document without having to use absolute URLs.
DID methods where storage size is a consideration might use relative URLs
to reduce the storage size of DID documents.
说明：
“be often used to" 则更强调这种用法的频繁发生，"be typically used to"
更强调这是一种标准或典型的用法，暗示这种用法是大多数情况下的默认或预期行为。个人判断此处用 typically 更合适。检索可以加上 retrieve。

*2，【5.1.3 Also Known As】*
2.1 建议中英文保持一致，中英文原文：
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这里的【提示：等效性和ALSO KNOWN AS】和英文保持一致

感谢～

胡楠