RE: [ Re: [review period] Arabic candidate authorized translation of WCAG2.0

Dear Richard,
Thank you again for supporting our translation project.
We fixed all point you mentioned.
Would you please check again and inform us if you have any other suggestions/comments.
Best regards,
Mohamed JEMNI.


-----Message d'origine-----
De : Richard Ishida [mailto:ishida@w3.org] 
Envoyé : mardi 26 mars 2013 18:42
À : Mohamed JEMNI
Cc : Coralie Mercier; w3c-translators@w3.org
Objet : Re: [review period] Arabic candidate authorized translation of WCAG2.0

There are some things that may need attention at http://validator.w3.org/i18n-checker/check?uri=www.utic.rnu.tn%2Fwcag2.0%2F#validate-by-uri+

In addition to the items called out explicitly, note:

1. we recommend to use dir="rtl" on the html element tag to set the default base direction for the document. For example, this would capture the title element too.

2. many of the spans labelled as 'en' have dir set to rtl - I think this should be ltr.

3. I noticed a number of places where span lang=en was used, but the content is Arabic, not English.

And here are a few other things I noticed from a quick perusal of the
document:

4. I noticed some references to "exemple.com" - is this a French translation of example.com or a typo? Is it ok to change example.com?

5. I'm curious: should it be "XML (AJAX)" or "(AJAX) XML" near the bottom of the page. (If you are struggling to make it look the way you want, I can help.)

6. The square bracketing looks odd in " المرجعين [[sRGB و[[IEC-4WD)". 
Was this intended?

7. The rendering also seems a little incorrect for the RGB information in "<p class="prefix"><b>ملاحظة  3: </b>التعريف المستخدم في مجال "تحولين متقابلين ينتج أحمر مشبع" عندما يكون R/(R+G+B)&gt;=0.8 والتغيير في قيمة
(R-G-B)*320 أكبر من 20 (القيمة السالبة ل (R-G-B)*320 تعتبر صفرا) لكل حالة تحول أو لكليهما. تتراوح قيمةR وG وB بين 0 و1 كما هو مبين في تعريف "الإضاءة النسبية" <a href="#HARDING-BINNIE">[هاردينغ- بيني]</a>.</p>"
I think more markup is needed to make it look right. (Again, contact me if necessary.)

8. In noticed colons at the end of a line being wrapped onto a new line on their own, presumably there should be a &#xA0; between the colon and the preceding word?

Hope that helps,

RI



On 26/03/2013 17:02, Coralie Mercier wrote:
>
> Dear Mohamed,
>
> Thank you for announcing that the Candidate Authorized Translation of 
> WCAG 2.0 into Arabic is availabel:
>    http://www.utic.rnu.tn/wcag2.0/
>
> We are now at the step in the Policy for Authorized Translation when 
> W3C initiates the review process, which will last at least 30 days.
>
> cf. http://www.w3.org/2005/02/TranslationPolicy.html
> [[
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