[XBL] Terminology and Conventions

Hi.

This is a last call comment on the XBL 2 Editor’s Draft (dated 27
October 2006).

1.1 Terminology and Conventions
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  An XBL subtree is a subtree in an XML document (an XML instance), the
  subtree having as its root node an xbl element in the XBL namespace,
  which is used to define bindings. XBL subtrees can stand alone in XBL
  documents, or can be included in non-XBL documents.

The “(an XML instance)” seems to serve no purpose.  It should be
removed.


The two mini-example paragraphs that begin with “In the example” aren’t
indented the same as the previous examples.  Actually this is the case
for many mini-example paragraphs in the document.


  Rules for exactly how the element, attribute, etc, must be treated
  when it is in error are always given when the term is used.

s/element, attribute, etc,/construct/


Thanks,

Cameron


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Received on Thursday, 7 December 2006 10:26:51 UTC