- From: Fredrik Fischer <fredrik.fischer@gmail.com>
- Date: Wed, 8 Jun 2022 07:09:41 +0200
- To: public-apa@w3.org
Hello everyone, I took a look at this document, finally, and have no comments other than that a little fleshing out would do it good (there are numerous passages that read far more like draft notes than finalized text); those passages, on the other hand, are intelligible and serve their purpose – I am just a stickler for not leaving text in that state which are for other peoples’ eyes, much less for what can only be described as public consumption. It's a nice touch that XAUR is being referenced (although “only” as a resource). Were one enough of a stickler, there would perhaps be reason to question why references to XAUR weren’t instead peppered throughout the document, the document itself only expounding on XAUR when necessary. One isn’t said sort of stickler. #PlatinumJubileeOrSomething That’s the whole of my concerns today. See you in a couple hours! Best, Fredrik
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