- From: Joshue O'Connor - InterAccess <josh@interaccess.ie>
- Date: Fri, 14 Mar 2025 17:25:58 +0000
- To: "Cleyra Uzcategui" <cleyra.uzcategui@gmail.com>, "Janina Sajka (janina@rednote.net)" <janina@rednote.net>
- Cc: public-apa-admin@w3.org
- Message-Id: <eme5f3cfd2-f872-4bec-8a21-6c9a89bc6b8f@14d9435b.com>
Thank you Cleyra, Niklas and Gottfried for spotting typos, grammar
gotchas and other suggestions!
Appreciated.
Joshue O'Connor
Director / InterAccess.ie
(+353) 01 961 0059
------ Original Message ------
From "Cleyra Uzcategui" <cleyra.uzcategui@gmail.com>
To "Janina Sajka (janina@rednote.net)" <janina@rednote.net>
Cc public-apa-admin@w3.org
Date 12/03/2025 5:02:12 PM
Subject Re: Call for Consensus (CfC): Publish AI-Accessibility FPWD
>Good draft.
>
>Here my comments:
>
>Comments on typos and grammar issues:
>
>Abstract section:
>
>"Machine learing technology also has unique and significant
>limitations."
>
>Correction: learing should be learning.
>
>
>"illustrative of accessibiltiy-related applications..."
>
>Correction: accessibiltiy should be accessibility.
>
>
>Accessibility context:
>
>"if machine learning algorithm may address broader accessibility
>issues..."
>
>correction: algorithm should be algorithms.
>
>
>“existing web standard such as..."
>
>correction: standard should be standards.
>
>
>Section 3.2
>
>“yellow has been found the achieve the highest result...”
>
>Correction: “yellow has been found to achieve the highest result...”
>
>
>“Until recently, the accuracy and validity of ASR techniques in the
>same language were considered as ineffective practices...”
>
>Correction: Remove "as" — “...were considered ineffective practices...”
>
>
>Section 3.4
>
>“...converting complex language content to the level of lower secondary
>reading abilities often require human intervention.”
>
>Correction: "Require" should be "requires"
>
>
>Section 3.5
>
>“Although there are few examples in a web context where the language of
>content is defined by machine learning processes...”
>
>Correction: "Few" should be "a few”
>
>
>Section 4:
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>“...and is capable of monitoring web content in real time.”
>
>Correction: "Is" should be "are" (referring to tools)
>Another aspect I noticed is the inconsistent use of "colour" and
>"color" — please ensure all terms align with the same spelling
>convention (British vs. American English).
>
>
>
>Comments on structure:
>
>The logical flow of the document is good. The structure moves from the
>relevance of current standards (Section 3.1) into specific use cases —
>alternative text, ASR, plain language, etc. — before transitioning into
>evaluation tools and accessibility overlays. This sequence makes sense,
>starting with guidelines and ending with practical tools.
>
>
>
>Suggestions on expanding scope:
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>Cognitive Accessibility and AI:
>
>Discuss how AI can support individuals with cognitive disabilities by
>simplifying navigation, reading comprehension, and time management.
>
>Example: AI tools that adjust web interfaces by minimizing
>distractions, providing summaries, or offering personalized reading
>levels.
>
>
>
>Cultural and Multilingual Accessibility:
>
>AI's ability to provide culturally aware translations — beyond literal
>text conversion — would be crucial for multilingual accessibility.
>
>The draft touched on Automated Language Detection, but it might be
>worth expanding into AI's role in ensuring content remains contextually
>appropriate when translated.
>
>
>Kind regards
>
>Cleyra Uzcategui
>
>Software Engineer
>
>📞 +44 (0)7756172116
>
>
>
>On Wed, 12 Mar 2025 at 14:31, Janina Sajka (janina@rednote.net)
><janina@rednote.net> wrote:
>>Colleagues:
>>
>>This is a Call for Consensus (CfC) to the Accessible Platform
>>Architectures (APA) Working Group proposing publication of a First
>>Public Working Draft (FPWD) of the Research Questions Task Force Note
>>track document: "Accessibility of machine learning and generative AI."
>>We generally refer to this document by its short name:
>>"AI-Accessibility."
>>
>>* The snapshot to review for this CfC is here:
>>
>>https://raw.githack.com/w3c/ai-accessibility/FPWD-ai-accessbility/index..html
>><https://raw.githack.com/w3c/ai-accessibility/FPWD-ai-accessbility/index.html>
>>
>>* RQTF's resolution requesting publication of the above snapshot
>>version as an APA Note is recorded here:
>> https://www.w3.org/2025/03/12-rqtf-minutes.html#e753
>>
>>* The W3C Note track process is described here:
>> https://www.w3.org/2023/Process-20231103/#note-track
>>
>>Please note the above snapshot will look slightly different when
>>published. The Status of this Document section will be updated, and
>>the document will display with different colorization to reflect the
>>document's FPWD status.
>>
>>As always with APA CfCs, editorial corrections, such as spelling or
>>grammar, will be made as needed without further notice. Please do
>>draw our attention to any editorial issues you find in this draft.
>>
>>
>>***Action to Take***
>>
>>This CfC is now open for objection, comment, as well as statements of
>>support via email. Silence will be interpreted as support, though
>>messages of support are certainly welcome.
>>
>>If you object to this proposed action, or have comments concerning
>>this proposal, please respond by replying on list to this message no
>>later than 23:59 (Midnight) Boston Time, Wednesday 19 March.
>>
>>NOTE: This Call for Consensus is being conducted in accordance with
>>the APA Decision Policy published at:
>>
>>http://www.w3.org/WAI/APA/decision-policy
>>
>>Janina and Matthew
>>APA Co-Chairs
>>
>>
>>--
>>
>>Janina Sajka (she/her/hers)
>>Accessibility Consultant https://linkedin.com/in/jsajka
>>
>>The World Wide Web Consortium (W3C), Web Accessibility Initiative
>>(WAI)
>>Co-Chair, Accessible Platform Architectures
>>http://www.w3.org/wai/apa
>>
>>Linux Foundation Fellow
>>https://www.linuxfoundation.org/board-of-directors-2/
>>
>>
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