- From: Joshue O'Connor - InterAccess <josh@interaccess.ie>
- Date: Fri, 14 Mar 2025 17:25:58 +0000
- To: "Cleyra Uzcategui" <cleyra.uzcategui@gmail.com>, "Janina Sajka (janina@rednote.net)" <janina@rednote.net>
- Cc: public-apa-admin@w3.org
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Thank you Cleyra, Niklas and Gottfried for spotting typos, grammar gotchas and other suggestions! Appreciated. Joshue O'Connor Director / InterAccess.ie (+353) 01 961 0059 ------ Original Message ------ From "Cleyra Uzcategui" <cleyra.uzcategui@gmail.com> To "Janina Sajka (janina@rednote.net)" <janina@rednote.net> Cc public-apa-admin@w3.org Date 12/03/2025 5:02:12 PM Subject Re: Call for Consensus (CfC): Publish AI-Accessibility FPWD >Good draft. > >Here my comments: > >Comments on typos and grammar issues: > >Abstract section: > >"Machine learing technology also has unique and significant >limitations." > >Correction: learing should be learning. > > >"illustrative of accessibiltiy-related applications..." > >Correction: accessibiltiy should be accessibility. > > >Accessibility context: > >"if machine learning algorithm may address broader accessibility >issues..." > >correction: algorithm should be algorithms. > > >“existing web standard such as..." > >correction: standard should be standards. > > >Section 3.2 > >“yellow has been found the achieve the highest result...” > >Correction: “yellow has been found to achieve the highest result...” > > >“Until recently, the accuracy and validity of ASR techniques in the >same language were considered as ineffective practices...” > >Correction: Remove "as" — “...were considered ineffective practices...” > > >Section 3.4 > >“...converting complex language content to the level of lower secondary >reading abilities often require human intervention.” > >Correction: "Require" should be "requires" > > >Section 3.5 > >“Although there are few examples in a web context where the language of >content is defined by machine learning processes...” > >Correction: "Few" should be "a few” > > >Section 4: > >“...and is capable of monitoring web content in real time.” > >Correction: "Is" should be "are" (referring to tools) >Another aspect I noticed is the inconsistent use of "colour" and >"color" — please ensure all terms align with the same spelling >convention (British vs. American English). > > > >Comments on structure: > >The logical flow of the document is good. The structure moves from the >relevance of current standards (Section 3.1) into specific use cases — >alternative text, ASR, plain language, etc. — before transitioning into >evaluation tools and accessibility overlays. This sequence makes sense, >starting with guidelines and ending with practical tools. > > > >Suggestions on expanding scope: > >Cognitive Accessibility and AI: > >Discuss how AI can support individuals with cognitive disabilities by >simplifying navigation, reading comprehension, and time management. > >Example: AI tools that adjust web interfaces by minimizing >distractions, providing summaries, or offering personalized reading >levels. > > > >Cultural and Multilingual Accessibility: > >AI's ability to provide culturally aware translations — beyond literal >text conversion — would be crucial for multilingual accessibility. > >The draft touched on Automated Language Detection, but it might be >worth expanding into AI's role in ensuring content remains contextually >appropriate when translated. > > >Kind regards > >Cleyra Uzcategui > >Software Engineer > >📞 +44 (0)7756172116 > > > >On Wed, 12 Mar 2025 at 14:31, Janina Sajka (janina@rednote.net) ><janina@rednote.net> wrote: >>Colleagues: >> >>This is a Call for Consensus (CfC) to the Accessible Platform >>Architectures (APA) Working Group proposing publication of a First >>Public Working Draft (FPWD) of the Research Questions Task Force Note >>track document: "Accessibility of machine learning and generative AI." >>We generally refer to this document by its short name: >>"AI-Accessibility." >> >>* The snapshot to review for this CfC is here: >> >>https://raw.githack.com/w3c/ai-accessibility/FPWD-ai-accessbility/index..html >><https://raw.githack.com/w3c/ai-accessibility/FPWD-ai-accessbility/index.html> >> >>* RQTF's resolution requesting publication of the above snapshot >>version as an APA Note is recorded here: >> https://www.w3.org/2025/03/12-rqtf-minutes.html#e753 >> >>* The W3C Note track process is described here: >> https://www.w3.org/2023/Process-20231103/#note-track >> >>Please note the above snapshot will look slightly different when >>published. The Status of this Document section will be updated, and >>the document will display with different colorization to reflect the >>document's FPWD status. >> >>As always with APA CfCs, editorial corrections, such as spelling or >>grammar, will be made as needed without further notice. Please do >>draw our attention to any editorial issues you find in this draft. >> >> >>***Action to Take*** >> >>This CfC is now open for objection, comment, as well as statements of >>support via email. Silence will be interpreted as support, though >>messages of support are certainly welcome. >> >>If you object to this proposed action, or have comments concerning >>this proposal, please respond by replying on list to this message no >>later than 23:59 (Midnight) Boston Time, Wednesday 19 March. >> >>NOTE: This Call for Consensus is being conducted in accordance with >>the APA Decision Policy published at: >> >>http://www.w3.org/WAI/APA/decision-policy >> >>Janina and Matthew >>APA Co-Chairs >> >> >>-- >> >>Janina Sajka (she/her/hers) >>Accessibility Consultant https://linkedin.com/in/jsajka >> >>The World Wide Web Consortium (W3C), Web Accessibility Initiative >>(WAI) >>Co-Chair, Accessible Platform Architectures >>http://www.w3.org/wai/apa >> >>Linux Foundation Fellow >>https://www.linuxfoundation.org/board-of-directors-2/ >> >>
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