Re: Small edits IMPORTANT: Abstract Rewrite, Draft #2

This change OK with me

From: Jason Taylor <jason@usablenet.com>
Date: Wednesday, September 3, 2025 at 17:18
To: Janina.sajka@gmail.com <janina.sajka@gmail.com>, Janina Sajka <janina@rednote.net>
Cc: Accessibility at the Edge <public-a11yedge@w3.org>, Lionel Wolberger <lionel@userway.org>, Mike Paciello <michael.paciello@audioeye.com>, Chris Novell <chnovell@gmail.com>
Subject: Small edits IMPORTANT: Abstract Rewrite, Draft #2

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Hi Janina

I would suggest removing "Real-time" from the opening statements , as dynamic I feel is enough and when we say both it seems we are trying to "sell" or "Oversell" the value or approach. The less we try and over push the value and more drying explain the process the better. In that same vain I would use the phrase "improve the accessibility of web experiences", instead of "deliver accessible web experiences".

So changing from:

This document examines the trade-offs and benefits of dynamic accessibility remediations applied to web content in real-time to deliver accessible web experiences.

To

This document examines the trade-offs and benefits of dynamic accessibility remediations applied to web content to improve the accessibility of web experiences.

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Regards

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From: Jason Taylor
Sent: Saturday, August 30, 2025 1:14 PM
To: Janina Sajka <janina@a11y.nyc>
Cc: Accessibility at the Edge <public-a11yedge@w3.org>; Lionel Wolberger <lionel@userway.org>; Mike Paciello <michael.paciello@audioeye.com>; Chris Novell <chnovell@gmail.com>
Subject: Re: IMPORTANT: Abstract Rewrite, Draft #2

Reads well. Effort appreciated


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On Aug 30, 2025, at 12:30 PM, Janina Sajka <janina@a11y.nyc> wrote:

Colleagues:

Herewith yet another deep rewrite of our Abstract. I've taken from
everyone's suggestions in this second draft.
Please respond with any further guidance:

https://a11yedge.github.io/capabilities/#abstract


Best,
Janina


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