Re: Sec. 1.3 Rewrite: Pass 2

Hi Jason:

Jason Taylor writes:
> Hi Janina
> 
> Not sure you are getting my emails
> 
They're coming through just fine.

> 1. UI modifications and pop-ups are not part of post source. They are not a subset.
> 

Now dropped from that paragraph. I believe it now reads exactly as we
agreed on the call.

However, I did indeed take the decision to move this paragraph up to be the
first, and not the second paragraph in this section.

> 2. This re-write create more edits . We agreed to removing and simplifying on the weekly call.
> 
I believe what's in para 1 is what we agreed. No?

> The ???obvious ??? statements and the last sentence in the final paragraph are too conversational , for the style we use .
> 
It would be trivial to say nothing about the FTC. Is this your
preference?

You've lost me about the "last statement in the final paragraph." Are you
referring to the quote from DOJ? It strikes me that quote is very
valuable.


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> On Oct 10, 2025, at 8:48???AM, Janina Sajka <janina@a11y.nyc> wrote:
> 
> ???I've worked in quotations from the DOJ Title II ruling in this revision
> because DOJ makes the same point we're making about WCAG:
> 
> https://a11yedge.github.io/capabilities/#overlays
> 
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Janina Sajka (she/her/hers)
Accessibility Consultant https://linkedin.com/in/jsajka

The World Wide Web Consortium (W3C), Web Accessibility Initiative (WAI)
Co-Chair, Accessible Platform Architectures	http://www.w3.org/wai/apa

Linux Foundation Fellow
https://www.linuxfoundation.org/board-of-directors-2/

Received on Friday, 10 October 2025 13:18:33 UTC