Re: IMPORTANT: Abstract Rewrite, Draft #2

Done!

Lionel Wolberger writes:
> Well done!
> 
> Nits:
> 
> Current: "all without relying on additional on-screen widgets???
> Proposed: "all without requiring additional on-screen widgets???
> Justification: While it???s important to state here there is no need for an on-screen widget, this overshoots the mark a bit IMHO
> 
> Current: There is a paragraph break in the abstract
> Proposed: No paragraph break.
> Justification: Paragraph breaks are not the norm in an abstract. Abstracts are expected to be condensed, and to move rapidly from topic to topic. The additional white space will not aid the reader very much and goes against convention.
> 
> 
> From: Jason Taylor <jason@usablenet.com>
> Date: Saturday, August 30, 2025 at 20:14
> To: Janina Sajka <janina@a11y.nyc>
> Cc: Accessibility at the Edge <public-a11yedge@w3.org>, Lionel Wolberger <lionel@userway.org>, Mike Paciello <michael.paciello@audioeye.com>, Chris Novell <chnovell@gmail.com>
> Subject: Re: IMPORTANT: Abstract Rewrite, Draft #2
> 
> 
> Reads well. Effort appreciated
> 
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> On Aug 30, 2025, at 12:30???PM, Janina Sajka <janina@a11y.nyc> wrote:
> 
> ???Colleagues:
> 
> Herewith yet another deep rewrite of our Abstract. I've taken from
> everyone's suggestions in this second draft.
> Please respond with any further guidance:
> 
> https://a11yedge.github.io/capabilities/#abstract
> 
> Best,
> Janina
> 
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Janina Sajka (she/her/hers)
Accessibility Consultant https://linkedin.com/in/jsajka

The World Wide Web Consortium (W3C), Web Accessibility Initiative (WAI)
Co-Chair, Accessible Platform Architectures	http://www.w3.org/wai/apa

Linux Foundation Fellow
https://www.linuxfoundation.org/board-of-directors-2/

Received on Sunday, 31 August 2025 10:40:47 UTC