draft-ietf-httpbis-incremental-03 ietf last call Artart review

Document: draft-ietf-httpbis-incremental
Title: Incremental Forwarding of HTTP Messages
Reviewer: Julian Reschke
Review result: Ready with Nits

Ready with minor nits.

In 3., two documents about "extended CONNECT" are mentioned. Both are about
WebSockets. Would it make sense sayint it here, potentially sparing readers the
indirection?

4.3: it's (to me) not complely clear what is recommended. Set limits on bytes
or time? The subsequent sentence indicates that this would be a problem as well.

IANA: maybe link to the HTTP Proxy Error Types registry - that would make it
easier to check the requirements.

Received on Saturday, 6 December 2025 17:24:20 UTC