draft-ietf-masque-connect-udp-listen-10 early Httpdir review from Mark Nottingham via Datatracker on 2025-10-20 (ietf-http-wg@w3.org from October to December 2025)

From: Mark Nottingham via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org>
Date: Sun, 19 Oct 2025 22:48:04 -0700
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Cc: draft-ietf-masque-connect-udp-listen.all@ietf.org, masque@ietf.org
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Document: draft-ietf-masque-connect-udp-listen
Title: Proxying Bound UDP in HTTP
Reviewer: Mark Nottingham
Review result: Ready with Nits

Nits:

* Introduction: "Combined with the HTTP CONNECT method (see Section 9.3.6 of
[HTTP]), it allows proxying the majority of a Web Browser's HTTP traffic." This
is slightly confusing to readers who aren't familiar with context; suggest:
"... allows proxying HTTP/1 and HTTP/2 (which are TCP-based) and HTTP/3 (which
is UDP-based).

* Throughout, 'header' should be 'header field'

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