Mahesh Jethanandani's No Objection on draft-ietf-httpbis-cache-groups-05: (with COMMENT)

Mahesh Jethanandani has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-httpbis-cache-groups-05: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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"Abstract", paragraph 0
>    This specification introduces a means of describing the relationships
>    between stored responses in HTTP caches, "grouping" them by
>    associating a stored response with one or more opaque strings.

The ballot text for this document still refers to Francesca as the Responsible
AD. That should be fixed.

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Section 1, paragraph 5
> oduces one new source of such events: a HTTP response header field that allow
>                                       ^
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Received on Monday, 5 May 2025 05:36:20 UTC