- From: David Schinazi <dschinazi.ietf@gmail.com>
- Date: Mon, 16 Sep 2024 09:38:49 -0700
- To: Gunter Van de Velde <gunter.van_de_velde@nokia.com>
- Cc: The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>, draft-ietf-httpbis-unprompted-auth@ietf.org, httpbis-chairs@ietf.org, ietf-http-wg@w3.org, tpauly@apple.com
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Hi Gunter, and thanks for your review. Regarding the editorial decision to use descriptive names instead of RFC numbers, we followed the HTTP Editorial Style Guide [1]. This matches other RFCs from the HTTPBIS WG. The intention is that readers shouldn't be memorizing RFC numbers. Thanks, David [1] https://httpwg.org/admin/editors/style-guide#reference-style On Mon, Sep 16, 2024 at 8:54 AM Gunter Van de Velde via Datatracker < noreply@ietf.org> wrote: > Gunter Van de Velde has entered the following ballot position for > draft-ietf-httpbis-unprompted-auth-11: No Objection > > When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all > email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this > introductory paragraph, however.) > > > Please refer to > https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/statements/handling-ballot-positions/ > for more information about how to handle DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. > > > The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-httpbis-unprompted-auth/ > > > > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > COMMENT: > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > > # Gunter Van de Velde, RTG AD, comments about > draft-ietf-httpbis-unprompted-auth-11 > > The document is well written and explains well the intended behavior to > people > without significant HTTP knowledge (like myself). > > I found it missed (simplification) opportunity to see that the reference > tags > towards references are mnemonic names instead of indicating the RFC numbers > itself. i find that it obscures the indication when a reference is an IETF > resource or is a non-IETF resource. For example [EdDSA] is used while it > would > of been easier to use [RFC8032]. Currently, a reader has an extra step and > needs to check the correlation of reference tag with the actual reference > itself. Not sure if this is the most optimal structure to use in an IETF > document. > > > >
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