Opsdir last call review of draft-ietf-httpbis-message-signatures-16

• From: Bo Wu via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org>
• Date: Tue, 21 Feb 2023 04:38:29 -0800
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Reviewer: Bo Wu
Review result: Has Nits

Hi,

I have reviewed this document as an ops reviewer. This is a well written
document.

Some editorial nits:
1. Section 1.3 s/obs-folds/obs-fold
2. Section 2: s/Signture/Signature
3. Remove redundant "the":
  Section 2.1.3  If the value of the the HTTP field in question
  Section 4.1.  The member's key is the label that uniquely identifies the
  message signature within the the HTTP message
4. 7.4.2  s/cacheing/caching

Thanks,
Bo Wu

Received on Tuesday, 21 February 2023 12:38:42 UTC