Martin Duke's Yes on draft-ietf-httpbis-semantics-16: (with COMMENT)

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draft-ietf-httpbis-semantics-16: Yes

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As someone who has learned HTTP via osmosis, it was very helpful to finally
read it all collected in one place. Thank you. I especially appreciate the
effort to document legacy undesirable behaviors, which implementers need to
account for in their work.

(7.6.3) Via

"If a port is not provided, a recipient MAY interpret that as meaning it was
received on the default TCP port, if any, for the received-protocol."

So if received-protocol is "3", it's a UDP port.

If received-protocol is "1" or "1.1", is the default port 80 or 443? IIUC the
scheme isn't included to determine this.

(7.7) Message Transformations

"A proxy that transforms the content of a 200 (OK) response can inform
downstream recipients that a transformation has been applied by changing the
response status code to 203 (Non-Authoritative Information)"

Why not an normative word, instead of "can"?

(12.5.3) Is it correct that "identity" and having no field value for
Accept-Encoding are synonymous?

"Servers that fail a request due to an unsupported content coding ought to
respond with a 415 (Unsupported Media Type) status"

Why not s/ought to/SHOULD ?

(14.3) Why can only origin servers send "Accept-Ranges: bytes"? Why not
intermediaries?

(15.3.7) "A sender that generates a 206 response with an If-Range header
field"... (13.1.5) leads me to believe that only clients can send If-Range. So
how can there be a response with If-Range?

(15.3.7.2) The last instance of THIS_STRING_SEPARATES has a trailing '--'. If
this is intentional, it ought to be explained.

(16.3.1) says field names SHOULD begin with a letter, but (16.3.2.1) says they
SHOULD begin with "an alphanumeric character". More broadly, the "Field name:"
description in (16.3.1) should probably refer to (16.3.2.1) unless I'm
misunderstanding the scope of these sections.

(17.13) s/TCP behavior/TCP or QUIC behavior

(B) It would be good to mention here that accept-ext has been removed in
(12.5.1), and accept-charset is deprecated in (12.5.2), if that is new to this
spec.

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