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Re: Working Group Last Call: draft-ietf-httpbis-bcp56bis-08

From: Julian Reschke <julian.reschke@gmx.de>
Date: Tue, 8 Jan 2019 07:08:45 +0100
To: Mark Nottingham <mnot@mnot.net>
Cc: Patrick McManus <mcmanus@ducksong.com>, HTTP Working Group <ietf-http-wg@w3.org>
Message-ID: <bedada65-8abd-408f-b4a0-37fc90405e2a@gmx.de>
On 2019-01-08 06:47, Mark Nottingham wrote:
> 
> 
>> On 8 Jan 2019, at 4:20 pm, Julian Reschke <julian.reschke@gmx.de> wrote:
>>
>> On 2019-01-08 00:30, Mark Nottingham wrote:
>>> Thanks, Julian. Responses below.
>>>> On 7 Jan 2019, at 5:28 am, Julian Reschke <julian.reschke@gmx.de> wrote:
>>>>
>>>> On 2018-11-30 20:46, Patrick McManus wrote:
>>>>> Hi All - I believe that BCP56bis is ready for Working Group Last Call.
>>>>> ...
>>>>
>>>> Here's my mainly editorial feedback:
>>>>
>>>> - Although HTTP URIs are by definition URLs, the document currently seems to avoid saying "URI", even when it should. For instance, the correct term really is "URI scheme", not "URL scheme". I believe we should check all uses of "URL" and make sure it's correct. Yes, I can work on a PR if desired.
>>> HTTP *is* a URL scheme, though -- and it's most commonly known for that. Given the audience, to me it doesn't seem prudent to confuse people with technically-correct-but-obtuse terminology.
>>
>> It is. But:
>>
>> - the document is not always talking about HTTP URLs when it says "URL", and
>>
>> - some of the referenced material has "URI" in the title, so just avoiding the term here IMHO doesn't make things clearer for readers who don't have our experience with these terms.
> 
> Specifically, two documents; RFC7320 and RFC5785bis. I've updated "well-known URL" to "well-known URI" for the latter; in my judgement, the former's references aren't directly related enough to use of "URL" to cause such confusion.

OK, I'll check the other cases whether there's more that I think needs 
to change.

>>> How do others feel about this?
>>>> - The document talks about discovering URIs of related resources, but doesn't even mention URI templates. I understand that using URI templates in link header fields still needs work, but minimally we should mention this instead of leaving readers wondering..
>>> Yes. I had reservations about mentioning it for the reasons you highlight, but added:
>>>    https://github.com/httpwg/http-extensions/commit/1ddb98efc2d
>>
>> +1
>>
>>> Please say if there's somewhere else that could benefit from a mention.
>>
>> As a reader of this document, I'd like to find out what the status of URI templates is in relation to Link header fields. I understand the answer is "we're not there yet", and maybe it would be good to just state that.
> 
> Anyone can mint a header that carries a uri template; we just don't have a generic way to carry one around. Also, I'm wary of saying something like the above, since it would trigger an unnecessary document update as soon as one were defined.

As long as it says "at the time of this writing", not necessarily.

I'm raising this because I feel this actually is something that readers 
of this spec will be looking for.

> ... >>>> - Several occurrences where the document says "header" when it 
should say "header field"
>>> See <https://github.com/httpwg/http-core/issues/111>. Since this document is blocked by the core docs, we can revise that at the RFC Editor if need be.
>>
>> -1. Revising docs after approval is problematic. (a) We may forget it, (b) there is little quality control. I don't think we can send this to the RFC Editor before the base docs are done.
> 
> I'll leave that for the chair to decide. In the meantime: <https://github.com/httpwg/http-extensions/issues/748>

Procedural feedback: this IMHO is something the WG needs to form 
consensus on, not a chair decision.

>>>> - "This means that status codes are not a reliable way to carry application-specific signals. Specifying that a particular status code has a specific meaning in the context of an application can have unintended side effects; if that status code is generated by a generic HTTP component can lead clients to believe that the application is in a state that wasn’t intended." - this makes it sound as if it's to be expected and normal that components rewrite status codes; I don't think that is true.
>>> It is normal; e.g., gateways generate 502-504 all the time; caches generate 304. Servers often generate 4xx range responses without consulting the resource that they're serving.
>>
>> Yes. But, from a protocol point of view, the distinction between "server" and "resource" doesn't matter. It's an implementation detail.
>>
>> The current text sort of implies that defining new status codes is inherently wrong because they might not travel correctly; this is IMHO very misleading.
> 
> I really don't see how you get that. The text is talking about using existing status codes, not minting new ones.

It talks about status codes in general; that includes new ones, no?

> ...
>>>> - "Applications using HTTP SHOULD specify if any request headers need to be modified or removed upon a redirect; however, this behaviour cannot be relied upon, since a generic client (like a browser) will be unaware of such requirements." - I would feel better about this if the base standard actually defined this the existing header fields.
>>> Yes; see <https://github.com/httpwg/http-core/issues/38>.
>>
>> I'm not happy to have this requirement here until we have understood to fulfil it ourselves in the base spec.
> 
> <https://httpwg.org/specs/rfc7231.html#considerations.for.new.header.fields> already says "Whether the header field ought to be preserved across redirects." The text you question in BCP56bis is about *new* headers; Core issue #38 is about defining that behaviour for headers that core defines. Why does this block?

Unless I'm missing something, the text is about all header fields: 
"Applications using HTTP SHOULD specify if any request headers need to 
be modified or removed upon a redirect;..."

 > ...

Best regards, Julian
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