"present" seems too weak. You need to prove possession of the private key,
not just show it. How about "authenticate with"?
On Thu, Jan 11, 2018 at 3:16 PM, Mark Nottingham <mnot@mnot.net> wrote:
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> > On 12 Jan 2018, at 9:38 am, Eric Rescorla <ekr@rtfm.com> wrote:
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> > I am looking for text which is technically accurate. the current text is
> not, for any sense of "obtain". What is required here is that the server
> authenticate to the client with a private key that corresponds to a
> certificate which passes the suitable tests. That's entirely different from
> "obtain".
>
> How about:
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> Original: """
> Note that for a connection to be considered authoritative for a given
> origin, the client is still required to obtain a certificate that passes
> suitable checks..."""
>
> Update: """
> Note that for a connection to be considered authoritative for a given
> origin, the server is still required to present a certificate that passes
> suitable checks..."""
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