Re: Working Group Last Call: Cache Digest draft-ietf-httpbis-cache-digest/

On 2017-07-27 17:25, Patrick McManus wrote:
> ...

Some editorial feedback:

1) ABNF list rule reference has wrong section 
(https://github.com/httpwg/http-extensions/pull/376)

2) Throughout s/header/header field/

3) 
<https://www.greenbytes.de/tech/webdav/draft-ietf-httpbis-cache-digest-02.html#rfc.section.5.p.4>:

"TODO: discuss how effective the suggested mitigations actually would be."

4) Please avoid lowercase BCP 14 keywords such as "may", or invoke 
<https://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc8174>

Best regards, Julian

Received on Saturday, 5 August 2017 19:04:14 UTC