- From: Larry Masinter <masinter@parc.xerox.com>
- Date: Sat, 27 Feb 1999 16:43:42 PST
- To: Keith Moore <moore+iesg@cs.utk.edu>, RFC Editor <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org>
- Cc: http-wg@hplb.hpl.hp.com
I propose that these editorial changes be made by the RFC editor (if the RFC editor prefers, I can prepare a new version with these changes.) ========================= Section 14.11: If the content-coding of an entity is not "identity", then the response MUST including a Content-Encoding entity-header (section 14.11) that lists the non-identity change 'including' to 'include'. ========================== Section 3.6.1 "Chunked Transfer Coding" Change trailer = *entity-header to trailer = *(entity-header CRLF) =========================== Section 8.1.4 Practical Considerations, last para.: A single-user client SHOULD NOT maintain more than connections with any server or proxy. change 'more than connections' to 'more than 2 connections'. ======================= section 3.2.3 URI comparison Characters other than those in the "reserved" and "unsafe" sets (see section 3.2) are equivalent to their ""%" HEX HEX" encoding. Change 'section 3.2' to 'RFC 2396 [42]'. The definition of URI syntax had been removed but the reference was wrong. ====================== Remove "URI. See RFC 2068" from the index. ====================== section 13.15.1 Add 'TE' and 'Trailer' to the list of Hop-by-Hop headers. ====================== section 14.9 Cache Control | "max-age" "=" delta-seconds ; Section 14.9.4 change the reference to 'Section 14.9.4' to 'Section 14.9.3' ======================= Section 3.2.2 change http_URL = "http:" "//" host [ ":" port ] [ abs_path ] to http_URL = "http:" "//" host [ ":" port ] [ abs_path [ "?" query ]] This is another artifact of the removal of the URI syntax in deference to RFC 2396. ======================= Section 8.2.3, first sentence: change "an client" to "a client" ====================== Section 8.2.4 Delete the phrase ", subject to the restrictions in section 8.2.3" since section 8.2.3 was deleted. ======================== Section 12.2 delete the phrase "(this specification reserves the header name Alternates)" since the reservation was in RFC 2068 but has since been removed. =========================
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