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From: Fred Douglis <douglis@research.att.com>
To: "Delta-V" <ietf-dav-versioning@w3.org>
Date: Wed, 02 Aug 2000 20:29:38 -0400
Subject: a few nits on the I-D
After today's WG meeting, I thought I'd mention a small number of
things that caught my eye when reading draft-ietf-deltav-versioning-06.
Apologies if any have already been caught or addressed.
First, I was caught by the spelling of "descendent" -- I thought it
was descendant. Miriam-Webster claims the former is an alternative
spelling for the latter, but the latter is clearly preferred. Was
this a conscious decision?
2.1, 2nd sentence: must -> MUST ?
2.2: give example of SET-TARGET?
2.3: hyphenate "client assigned"?
Why are all the x.y.z headings followed by text w/o spacing? Typo or
some odd IETF requirement? e.g., 3.1.1
3.2: define "dead properties" or cross ref?
3.4: mention that current time is relative to the server's locale.
4.1: "has no affect" -> "has no effect" (twice)
I have a couple of other things to mention, and will do so in separate
messages.
Fred Douglis
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