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Editorial comment about the editorial copy of part 1, dated $Date: 2001/09/06 11:18:49 $

From: Hugo Haas <hugo@w3.org>
Date: Mon, 10 Sep 2001 14:49:55 -0700
To: xmlp-comments@w3.org
Message-ID: <20010910144955.D526@w3.org>
Here are a few very minor things that I noted:

Section 2.5[1]:

    2. Process SOAP blocks targeted at the SOAP node, generating SOAP
       faults (see 4.4 SOAP Fault if necessary. A SOAP node MUST process
					     ^^
					missing parenthesis

Section 2[2]:

   SOAP messages are fundamentally one-way transmissions from a SOAP
   sender to a SOAP receiver, but as illustrated above, SOAP messages are
   often combined to implement patterns such as request/response.

  "as illustrated above": there is no request/response above anymore.

Section 4.1.1[3]:

   The serialization rules defined by SOAP (see [1]SOAP Encoding are
   identified by the URI "http://www.w3.org/2001/06/soap-encoding". SOAP
								 ^^
							missing parenthesis

Section 6.1[4] and also section 8.1 of part 2[5]:

 6.1 Normative References

 [..]

   2
          XML Protocol Comments Archive (See
          http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/xmlp-comments/.)
  
   3
          XML Protocol Discussion Archive (See
          http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/xml-dist-app/.)

   4
          XML Protocol Charter (See
          http://www.w3.org/2000/09/XML-Protocol-Charter.)

  I wonder if such references (particularly 2 and 3) can be normative.
  We can't expect people to read all the mailing list archives. I
  think that those should be move to the non-normative section. I
  think that it is the same for the charter.

  I was also wondering why the reference to the XML Information Set
  specification was really an informative reference[6].

  1. http://www.w3.org/2000/xp/Group/1/08/29/soap12-part1.html#procsoapmsgs
  2. http://www.w3.org/2000/xp/Group/1/08/29/soap12-part1.html#msgexchngmdl
  3. http://www.w3.org/2000/xp/Group/1/08/29/soap12-part1.html#soapencattr
  4. http://www.w3.org/2000/xp/Group/1/08/29/soap12-part1.html#N9F3
  5. http://www.w3.org/2000/xp/Group/1/08/29/soap12-part2.html#N931
  6. http://www.w3.org/2000/xp/Group/1/08/29/soap12-part1.html#NA68
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