Re: [heads up] relaunching application/xenc+xml registration

* Jose Kahan wrote:
>[1] http://www.w3.org/2005/08/15-xmlencreg.html

At a glance:

The 'charset' parameter should be defined with reference to RFC 3023
such that its semantics and lexical space are clear.

You have a reference to [XML-MIT], this should probably be [XML-MT] to
match the entry in the list of references.

s/#sec-Sign-with-Encrypt/#sec-Security/

I think the "Change controller" field is for change control over the
media type registration, not for the XML Encryption specification.

s/xml-encryption@3\.org/xml-encryption@w3.org/

For fragment identifiers it should point at least at the corresponding
section in RFC 3023.

"Applications which use this media type" could reference
#def-Application in xmlenc-core instead.
-- 
Björn Höhrmann · mailto:bjoern@hoehrmann.de · http://bjoern.hoehrmann.de
Weinh. Str. 22 · Telefon: +49(0)621/4309674 · http://www.bjoernsworld.de
68309 Mannheim · PGP Pub. KeyID: 0xA4357E78 · http://www.websitedev.de/ 

Received on Monday, 15 August 2005 14:19:29 UTC