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Re: Remove TOC for Pt2 from Pt1 and Vice Versa ?

From: John Ibbotson <john_ibbotson@uk.ibm.com>
Date: Wed, 10 Apr 2002 14:46:38 +0100
To: xml-dist-app@w3.org
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+1
During my read through at the new year I thought those sections were
clumsy.
John

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>                       Marc Hadley
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>                       w3c-xml-protocol-wg-req        Subject:  Remove TOC
for Pt2 from Pt1 and Vice Versa ?
>                       uest@w3.org
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>                       04/10/2002 12:31 PM
>                       Please respond to Marc
>                       Hadley
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> All,
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> I'd like to propose that we remove the current text that lists the
> contents of part 2 in part 1 and vice versa and replace it with a simple
> reference so people know the other part exists and where to find it. I
> would also add a note that part 2 depends on part 1.
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> I think this will make the abstract and intro much cleaner and reduce
> the amount of duplication between the two parts.
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> Thoughts ?
> Marc.
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> Marc Hadley <marc.hadley@sun.com>
> XML Technology Centre, Sun Microsystems.
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